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A Serial Killer

A doctor ordained to bring people from death to life Turning into an assassin sending them from life to death Lopsided was his brain, a sure psychopath Dr. Harold Shipman committed crime after crime in stealth None suspected him of his evil designs And he continued his sinister escapade for long. Did violence rage in his heart as a youth? Or did his ego and wickedness subdue him lifelong? He decimated not just one or two but many Were they his opponents, no one knows Sadly they were all elderly women, Who were never his adversaries, one has to suppose.. Was he ruled by some uncontrollable impulses? Or as a child did something tear him apart? Were they crimes done in cold blood? Or the offshoot of a dark malice hidden away in his heart As a child seeing his mother’s suffering and death From painful cancer and being under morphine He must have thought that death was more covetable than being in pain Whose suffering had dealt a death blow to him in his teen Were his killings an act of recompense or was he a sadist, Deriving pleasure out of his heinous acts- still a shrouded mystery Before much investigation could be done about his psyche He hanged himself, becoming part of history Intriguing is the working of human brain None can think of Shipman without some trace of pain August.21.2022 `~ Placed Sixth~ Dr. Harold Shipman Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joe Maverick

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Date: 9/3/2022 1:24:00 AM
Yeah! Like a psychopath. Beautifully written. Great biography, in short. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/22/2022 9:27:00 PM
Valsa, you've written a story that features skillful lyrical traits and is supported by extensive research. You provided a really detailed narration of the story of a disturbed individual. He was enlisted despite the fact that he was a murderer and a stain on humanity. I conducted a lot of research, but in the end I decided against entering this contest. Best wishes for a big win.
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Date: 8/22/2022 8:59:00 PM
An image fill piece weighting in on a devious psyche. I read in your piece questions and deep pain that such disadvantage was taken of the most vulnerable.
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Date: 8/22/2022 11:42:00 AM
An informative, brilliant, creative write, a top contender for the contest I'M SURE. What a despicable sick individual, what makes them tick, maybe far removed cousins with Putin! Hugs and blessings Valsa, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/21/2022 10:33:00 AM
Clearly deranged, as American doctors keep their patients alive as long as they still have money in their bank account! Enjoyed, Valsa! Aloha!
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Date: 8/21/2022 8:30:00 AM
oh I think I recall a movie or something like that about this weird person. For sure I need to look him up and try that contest. WELL done, Valsa. A sure winner
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Date: 8/21/2022 6:57:00 AM
A troubled man's story you narrated in every detail, Valsa, that enlists shame of a killer and blot on humanity. Hope you win BIG.
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Date: 8/21/2022 6:02:00 AM
Only he could have shared what was going on in his brain. So sad that he did what he did. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 8/21/2022 5:18:00 AM
A hard one to write about. I can’t delve there. You did well, Valsa!
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Date: 8/21/2022 1:38:00 AM
A well researched story, complimented by skilful poetic attributes. A pleasure to read, albeit, a dark sinister true factual time.
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Date: 8/20/2022 10:26:00 PM
One can hardly judge what went into his head. Mercy killing is no excuse. There are so many murders around the world and I think many are not even detected. God will be his judge. For it is written Thou shall not kill. Clever poem.
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Date: 8/20/2022 10:21:00 PM
Superlative rhyming redux of an evil killer. Great contest entry, methinks, Valsa. Good luck! :) gw
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