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A seed of poetry

Like water that flows in a river Time will not stop and wait It comes and then it goes And now will soon be late The sun will not rise And forget to set Today will not stay here forever Time was born and passed away While I was chasing dreams I never dreamt of Dreaming of things that were Not for me to dream about I didn’t know at first That in my inside There is a seed germinating Deep in the roots of my heart Where veins and arteries Carry blood in and out The eyes of my eyes Could not see The ears of my ears Could not hear The tongue of my tongue Could not taste The nose of my nose Could not smell The mind of my mind Was uncounscious As this seed Was patiently growing It was watered by tears That couldn’t fall off my eyes When I cried It was fertilized by my deep thoughts That denied me time to rest The pain I felt within Was manure to it And now it has grown It has grown into a tree it has grown into a green looking tree A tree that sprouts colorful flowers And I am hopeful Hopeful to reap tasty fruits Of this seed of poetry Sown in me by God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 1:47:00 PM
excellent analogy
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:02:00 AM
verse 2 is a sad one though i think writing helps, its actually my favorite. and God has sown something powerful.. Tumelo
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Date: 2/12/2010 11:14:00 AM
Well done, Bojosi. God's gift of poetry is very good for the poets soul...as well as others. Your poetry seed seems to be growing very well. Smiles, Dane Ann (soup mail)
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Date: 2/11/2010 6:58:00 AM
wow this is a beautiful poem and so true to how i myself feel! i love that last line and especially because my husband and i were haveing a conversation about the link between our creator and our creations,how i think we get the urge to create from gods personality,if that makes any sense. i loved it! =)
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Date: 2/1/2010 12:39:00 PM
Each of us, God gives gifts. It's up to us to seek them out and use them to His glory. Very well written, with much truths. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:47:00 PM
A beautiful description of a poem. Happy Writing.
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:40:00 PM
That is a wonderful seed...let it keep growing...love your poem...Marty
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:33:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Bojosi!! Goes to my favs. It is a gift from God! Keep sharing this truth from your heart! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:23:00 AM
Great way to express this talent that God has given unto you. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:25:00 AM
From little acorns great oaks grow. and I'd say you are on your way. great verse....Margaret
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