A Seed a Weed a Dandelion

I’m blowing on you, pretty dandelion
Making a wish with every breathe
Pity your life is really short, then death.
I Blow on you again soft dandelion
As I watch a breath taking sunset,
The sun slipping quickly away, unreal,
The golden atmosphere surrounding us
Looks like a fairy tale, magical, surreal
Blowing again, but fear your end
As your sensuous feathery fluff 
Will soon disperse,
Your beauty of downy tufts 
Lasts for but a while,
And then becomes obverse.
Mesmerized I blow once more, 
You float away, could you be shy,
Or maybe sad, for soon you’ll die
I blow, your soft fluff, it floats up high 
Such a shame you’ll, be no more,
For your seeds and tufts are nearly gone
To your bare and centre core.
Although known as a mere weed,
Your heritage is the daisy flower
Your destiny, to spread your seed.
Far and wide you will travel dear friend,
The joy you’ll give is huge,
Although Henry, our Great Dane
Our almost human pooch,
Followed you far too close
And got your seedy fluff inside his nose,
He sniffs and incessantly wheezes
Have to take him to the vet,
As he can’t control, his sneezes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Oh poor pooch, I understand his misery. Quite an amazing write.
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Yes, it was sad, he looked so sorrowful but an injection from the vet and he was as right as reign. Thanks for a cute comment MLK. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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September 14, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Hi Jennifer, This is a deep poem and it makes one who think about how short life is. So one mustn't take if for granted. At least that what I got from of it. Have a fantastic weekend my friend:-) Alexis
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September 15, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Yes Alexis my friend, life is short, but the poor dandelion's life is even shorter and the moth even shorter than the dandelion, so we must enjoy what life offers us whilst we can. Take care my dear friend. hugs and love, Jennifer..
Kiser Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Wow, I used to love kicking the dandelions and watching the fly away, as a kid. This took me way back to a fun memory.
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 12:25 AM
I'm glad the poem brought back fun and happy memories MLk, something or someplace will always ring a bell about our past. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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September 13, 2019 at 7:25 PM
What a fabulously penned poem. Jennifer mou. Panagiota
Proxenos Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 12:21 AM
Thank-you my friend, stay well. Hugs and kisses, Jennifer.
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September 13, 2019 at 12:45 PM
I was just like you as a child when it came to dandelions. Once I brought my mother a bouquet of them. She smiled, but didn't put them on display. Had to giggle when the dandelion fibers were bothering your dog. Lovely poem, Jennifer! Really enjoyed this topic too. Hugs, Carolyn
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September 14, 2019 at 12:20 AM
Thank-you Carolyn, you are such a gentle soul and this aways reflects in your kind comments. That was a very sweet thing to do as a child for your mother and take her a bunch of dandelions always thoughtful. Glad the sneezy great dane gave you a smile and that you enjoyed my dandelion poem. Thank you Carolyn! Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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September 12, 2019 at 7:08 PM
G'day Jennifer … I am a true fan of dandelions, and I found them useful for eating the tender leaves or making a tea from the roots. I never classed them as a weed. You also gave the dandelion a positive feel in your verse. I like many have written a verse on the dandelion so it must have an attraction - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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September 13, 2019 at 1:37 AM
I didn't know that you can make tea from its roots - first time I'v heard this will try it one day! And the leaves do you put them into a salad? Thanks for a great comment Lindsay - I think dandelions attract all ages - they are just different and pretty. Hugs, Jennifer.
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September 12, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Hi Jennifer, I loved your take on the humble Dandelion. I loved the creative way in which you gave life to the flower. It gives life to so many others. Now you shall have me wondering where the seeds shall end up, can be such a long journey. Loved the content \Jennifer. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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September 13, 2019 at 1:33 AM
It is such a mobile, pretty, cheeky flower, that I thought it needs to be made to come alive for it is so lively - I'm glad you enjoyed it Mike and I hope you have a great weekend ahead. Hugs, Jennifer.
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September 12, 2019 at 5:39 PM
that was fun how you made it like you were talking to the dandelion , ending with the poor dog!! I wrote like this one time about watching my dog's fur fly up into the air and wondering where it all went!!
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September 13, 2019 at 1:29 AM
Hi Andrea, I thought the poor great dane would be an example of how this beautiful flower gives humans, and dogs, major sinus problems , yet such a pretty flower. Glad you enjoyed me talking to it! Hugs, Jennifer.
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September 12, 2019 at 1:56 PM
- Dandelion is spring's most beautiful flower (weed) ... blow your wishes ... don't sneeze :) - A lovely poem dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 13, 2019 at 1:24 AM
Thank-you my dear soul sister - I adore dandelions and feel so sad when I think of their short live but happy that they spread their seeds. Hugs, Jennifer.
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September 11, 2019 at 7:32 AM
Amazing how you find your themes my friend--such a wonderful dissertation, Jennifer--details we observe and can relate to from your talented pen. So well written!
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September 12, 2019 at 11:22 AM
Hi Vijay, Thank-you for a wonderful comment - a piece of fluffy dandelion floated past me and immediately I thought what a shame, this flower is already dying, but spreading its seeds, how incredible nature is. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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September 11, 2019 at 4:24 AM
Lovely tribute to the humble dandelion. I think they are a nice bright flower despite the fact that they're classed a weed. Tom.
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September 12, 2019 at 11:09 AM
In the least of expected places one finds flowers that are classed as weeds, but that are so bright and pretty. The dandelion I agree, is one such plant. Blessings Tom, Jennifer.
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September 10, 2019 at 5:13 PM
enjoyed this study in detail, jen... i look at a dandelion in a more fanciful way!...huggs
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September 12, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Hi Nette, I know what you mean, your poems are beautifully depicted in fanciful ways - mine is more of a documentary until the great Dane comes into the picture. Hugs and blessings, Jen.
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