A Secret Place

As I walked through the trees
in the far distance I could hear
a rumbling yet tinkling noise
drawn towards the lovely sound

I moved into deeper denser woods
few sun patches can reach through
cold and dank, the air feeling icy
chilled to the bone I carry onward

When suddenly to my wonderment
I break through into a glade of fancy
the noise explained as cascading down
the waters seem to laugh, giggle and dance

Flumes of mist and steam arise
as the falling waters land on rocks
a small lagoon completes the vision
before me is stretched a paradise

A rainbow shines within the falls
and utter peace surrounds it all
a beautiful and secret hidden place 
I walk away knowing I can return

That it will be there when I need solace
when I am weary and tired by life
here I will come to repair my soul
and give myself over to its harmony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 11:28 PM
Shadow Such a serene and calming place you have written about. A place for solitude and to be carefree. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Colours poem.
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:53 AM
- Now it's not a secret anymore ..... beautiful place & poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 3:41 PM
Anne hi some secrets share well. ty for taking time to read Shadow
Tacito Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 7:48 AM
Lagoons, waterfalls...yes, I'll be right there with you with a bonfire & some Smores. :) This was an enjoyable read. May we all find this solace.
Hamilton Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:14 AM
sounds Idyllic Dear Drake bring it on lets all enjoy ty for reading Shadow
Ryerson Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 3:46 AM
I sure would like to see that place you have so beautifully described, Shadow (I LOVE your name too!) - Tim
Hamilton Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 11:12 AM
hi Tim ty so much it is a vision from my mind. ynx for taking time to read Shadow (been known by it for many years)
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