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A Secret Place

As I walked through the trees in the far distance I could hear a rumbling yet tinkling noise drawn towards the lovely sound I moved into deeper denser woods few sun patches can reach through cold and dank, the air feeling icy chilled to the bone I carry onward When suddenly to my wonderment I break through into a glade of fancy the noise explained as cascading down the waters seem to laugh, giggle and dance Flumes of mist and steam arise as the falling waters land on rocks a small lagoon completes the vision before me is stretched a paradise A rainbow shines within the falls and utter peace surrounds it all a beautiful and secret hidden place I walk away knowing I can return That it will be there when I need solace when I am weary and tired by life here I will come to repair my soul and give myself over to its harmony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/27/2014 11:28:00 PM
Shadow Such a serene and calming place you have written about. A place for solitude and to be carefree. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Colours poem.
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Date: 6/3/2013 11:53:00 AM
- Now it's not a secret anymore ..... beautiful place & poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2013 3:41:00 PM
Anne hi some secrets share well. ty for taking time to read Shadow
Date: 6/3/2013 7:48:00 AM
Lagoons, waterfalls...yes, I'll be right there with you with a bonfire & some Smores. :) This was an enjoyable read. May we all find this solace.
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Date: 6/3/2013 11:14:00 AM
sounds Idyllic Dear Drake bring it on lets all enjoy ty for reading Shadow
Date: 6/3/2013 3:46:00 AM
I sure would like to see that place you have so beautifully described, Shadow (I LOVE your name too!) - Tim
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Date: 6/3/2013 11:12:00 AM
hi Tim ty so much it is a vision from my mind. ynx for taking time to read Shadow (been known by it for many years)

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