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A Secret: For Auction Contest

This is the last piece to go. All the others are sold.
I hate to part with it, but now that I've grown old
I need to find the right home for it before I die.
I'll explain its importance if you're wondering why.
You see, it's been a treasure since before I was born.
My father found it buried in a city that was war torn.
He marveled that among all the rubble and concrete,
no scratch marred its beauty nor was it burned by heat.
It graced our living room with the status of a Queen,
Most beautiful Brazilian Rosewood vanity ever seen.
Father had to have it to match the great beauty of his wife,
Adrianna, was fragile and giving birth to me took her life.
Father gave me the vanity, a priceless piece, an heirloom.
One rainy day I was bored and was dancing around my room.
I bumped into the vanity and from behind a drawer fell a note...
"Who ever finds this, look for the secret," my Mother wrote.
That was seventy years ago, and no secret  did I ever find.
Age has taken my strength away and now that I am blind,
I can no longer search for the secret within this vanity.
I want it to belong to someone kind while I still have my sanity.
It's being auctioned by verbal bid so I can hear the voice
of the one I deem worthy of my treasure. I'll make the final choice.
Money is no longer important so the auctioneer will look to me
when that special voice I hear, I'll nod and that bid will be the fee.
I've set no starting bid and no reserve for it's time to let it go.
Come, take a look. Rub your hand across the wood grain's glow.
I hope you will find the secret my Mother hid so well inside,
perhaps a young man will take it home, as a gift for his bride.

The value to me is priceless, and I would sell it for only a cent.
If I hear something in your voice, I will know for you it's meant.
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February 24, 2016  " The Auctioneer Contest by Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Milliner Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:36 PM
I loved this Lin! You sold me!! Congratulations on the win!!
Lane Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Thank you, Sarita.
Dutta Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Congrats Lin to win.. Anisha D
Lane Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Thanks, Anisha.
Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:08 AM
I was lost in the auctioneerist and wished to buy something symbolic of love between mother and daughter! Congrats on your first placement, Lin!
Cheema Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Oh thanks Lin! You're an angel! Love..
Lane Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 10:11 AM
OH... I hear your voice, nod to the auctioneer, and the vanity is yours! Thanks so much, Balveen.
Daniel Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:24 AM
What an excellent way to auction this! I'm sure anyone would want to buy:)loved it:) congratulations on your 1st place win:) very well deserved.
Lane Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 5:21 AM
Thank you for such generous comments, Jo.
Smith Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Well done Lin, congratulations and most deserved...
Lane Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Your comments is most gracious, Charlie, and I thank you.
Roper Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:26 PM
This is wonderful write :) Lin, congratulations on your 1st place win!
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Thanks so much, my sweet.
Murray Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Oh my, I didn't want that story to end Lin. Well deserved first place.
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 4:54 PM
aww thanks, Jean. That's so sweet of you.
Raven Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Hi Lin, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I did Love the journey that you took me on in this write. A deep, emotional, well crafted work. It ticks all boxes Lin. An excellent write on the theme. This is deserving of a seven and finds its way into my faves very easily. A beautiful write Lin....Vlad.
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Thanks, Vlad. You're always so generous with your comments. Thank you for adding it to your fave list.
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:52 AM
You did a wonderful job with this, Lin! Congrats on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thanks for the sweet compliment, Sandra. Thanks so mucn.
Scars Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Lin, congrats on your top placement!-luloo
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Hi Laura, and thanks so very much.
Pennell  Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:24 AM
congrats a good tale told
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Hi Stephen, and I appreciate your comment and reading.
Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Greetings Lin. Congrats on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Hello to you, Teddy, and thanks so much.
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 7:51 AM
delightful story Lin so full of emotion - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thanks ever so much, Jan.
Turner Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations Peaches on your first place winning write. Very emotional write. Peace my good friend:)
Lane Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thanks, Danny. These are nice messages to come home to.
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