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A secret

A secret Those cool evening breeze in summer season And those empty spaces of my fingers Which only remind me of your fingers And when I close my eyes, I don't know why I smile remembering only the fragrance of your hair. This evening breeze like a cold wave While running in the sky Asks me the reason for my smile. I also said that this is just a secret of mine and mine If I tell you, then this secret Will no longer be a secret Filled with the feelings of peace. Those cool evening breeze in summer season And those empty spaces of my fingers Which only remind me of your fingers. --- @poet_suyash_awasthi

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Date: 6/2/2024 11:34:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/31/2024 10:13:00 PM
I love writing my overthinking
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