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A Seasonal Story

Up sprang a gust of playful wind scattering cherry blossom in this Maytime spring swirling about legs, old and rickety leaving a scene of enchanting serendipity 'twas a canines randomly sprinkled stools transformed into petal encrusted jewels euphemized on this fine day which nature wind and circumstance favour a setting made possible by a mongrels behaviour an accidental work of art forged by the elements taking part this vision of wonder, the soul to delight blossom covered,,,,,,,lumps of shite.

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Skat A

Date: 1/27/2016 1:30:00 PM

EATON, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT **

Ngoc Nguyen

Date: 7/22/2012 2:26:00 AM

A very nice poem, but the rhyme seems to distract from my complete ability to enjoy it. Your poem might work better for you unrhymed.--Ngoc

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 7:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Ken. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2011 5:17:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Ken. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Ken Eaton-Dykes
Date: 10/24/2011 2:08:00 PM

Hi Carol. So nice to hear from you, even nicer what you say. Just been reading your work "Delightful" Ken

Ken Eaton-Dykes
Date: 10/24/2011 1:30:00 PM

Hi Carol. So nice to hear from you, even nicer what you say. Just been reading some of your work. "Delightful"

Tashakay Bailey

Date: 10/23/2011 2:15:00 PM

Very nicely done :-)

Ken Eaton-Dykes
Date: 10/24/2011 2:27:00 AM

to quote, "Little about me", Youv'e shown the nice side of yourself to me. Ken

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2011 8:33:00 AM

Such wonderful Poetry you have written so nicely here.... Michael

Ken Eaton-Dykes
Date: 10/23/2011 9:00:00 AM

thanks for your words of encouragement Michael. Been looking at your work, you are very accomplished. wish I could be so profuse and quality consistant. Ken.