A Sealed Soul

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Written: October 12, 2023 Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Ink Empress ______________________________________________________ Guile gust I grasp your gasp goad grafts gently glowing the gray grove greenery growing glean grace Skies Straight I snared your sight Schizoid swing of Steward sewn souls spewing as oxblood stems stark stance Wince, wight I've weaned your whiff the world-wedged wink was wrapped while not washing down the wild waft when whet Froth flow your frisk frame flits follow fall foliage freshly framed flimsy fruity field faint flame. Sand stake of smog steam sieve you stride in silence steps by slamming a skulker-shaped slope spread string.

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 6:19:00 AM

Dear Sotto, very well written cinquain for the contest, i love the way you pair words and how you make your words flow, excellent alliterations too and depth in your words. Thank you for writing and for sharing, congratulations on winning

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/15/2023 6:13:00 AM

Woah, this cinquain poem has been so brilliantly crafted with impeccable vocabulary and immaculate flow. Your vivid alliterations throughout really kept me captivated and this poem is definitely wrapped in myriad imageries along with poetic depth. "follow fall foliage", "the gray grove greenery growing glean grace" I must say that this is indeed a very creative write, you've used poetic devices so flawlessly here..with amazing flow..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/13/2023 5:35:00 AM

A poem resounding alliteration throughout my friend. Your poetic prowess shines!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2023 4:05:00 AM

Brilliant Sotto. Amazing ideas executed with alliteration. I'm sure you have a winner!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/13/2023 2:40:00 AM

You write for a contest and employ all forms of alliteration and metaphors. A great poet who deserves high placement. Blessings.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/12/2023 10:18:00 PM

Composing a poem with alliterations is hard you accomplished it. Good luck in the contest, my friend

Paige Hind

Date: 10/12/2023 7:09:00 PM

WOW, SOTTO! This is definitely out of my league, Amazing work, truly.