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A Sealed Soul

Written: October 12, 2023 Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Ink Empress ______________________________________________________ Guile gust I grasp your gasp goad grafts gently glowing the gray grove greenery growing glean grace Skies Straight I snared your sight Schizoid swing of Steward sewn souls spewing as oxblood stems stark stance Wince, wight I've weaned your whiff the world-wedged wink was wrapped while not washing down the wild waft when whet Froth flow your frisk frame flits follow fall foliage freshly framed flimsy fruity field faint flame. Sand stake of smog steam sieve you stride in silence steps by slamming a skulker-shaped slope spread string.
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October 17, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Dear Sotto, very well written cinquain for the contest, i love the way you pair words and how you make your words flow, excellent alliterations too and depth in your words. Thank you for writing and for sharing, congratulations on winning
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October 15, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Woah, this cinquain poem has been so brilliantly crafted with impeccable vocabulary and immaculate flow. Your vivid alliterations throughout really kept me captivated and this poem is definitely wrapped in myriad imageries along with poetic depth. "follow fall foliage", "the gray grove greenery growing glean grace" I must say that this is indeed a very creative write, you've used poetic devices so flawlessly here..with amazing flow..
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 5:35 AM
A poem resounding alliteration throughout my friend. Your poetic prowess shines!
Jones Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 4:05 AM
Brilliant Sotto. Amazing ideas executed with alliteration. I'm sure you have a winner!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 2:40 AM
You write for a contest and employ all forms of alliteration and metaphors. A great poet who deserves high placement. Blessings.
Roper Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 10:18 PM
Composing a poem with alliterations is hard you accomplished it. Good luck in the contest, my friend
Hind Avatar
October 12, 2023 at 7:09 PM
WOW, SOTTO! This is definitely out of my league, Amazing work, truly.
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