Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

A Seahorse Play

In liquid castles, dense and warm
       These princely equine fish do swarm
In peaceful beauty do they reign
           Among the rainbows near to feign

A scarlet mood to chase the sea
                     Of dangers impotent to flee
Perhaps a golden tone would do
                    To spark a regal rendezvous

A dance of love in sweet comport
                     To decorate the azure court
Ensures a stunning dynasty
            To grace this world for me to see


4/19/18
Contest; Seahorses
Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Sandra Haight May 9, 2018 at 8:31 AM A well-written, lovely, majestic Rhyme, Mike. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra Mike Gentile May 9, 2018 at 8:44 AM Thank you so much, Sandra xxoo

Julia Ward May 9, 2018 at 12:39 AM A right royal write, this! Well done for your win in my "Seahorses" contest, Mike. Mike Gentile May 9, 2018 at 7:14 AM Thank you so much, Julia, it was great fun xxoo

Line Gauthier May 8, 2018 at 11:02 PM Totally charming. Well done, Mike and congrats on a well deserved win. Mike Gentile May 9, 2018 at 8:43 AM Thank you so much, Line xxoo

Susan Gentry May 8, 2018 at 10:15 PM Congratulations on your win Mike. A lovely seahorse poem. Well done. Mike Gentile May 9, 2018 at 8:43 AM Thank you so much, Susan xxoo

Eve Roper May 8, 2018 at 7:26 PM Marvelous write, Mike, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs Mike Gentile May 8, 2018 at 8:11 PM Thank you so much, Eve xxoo

Gershon Wolf April 27, 2018 at 1:43 AM Seahorses never had it so good as they have it in your gleaming poetic tribute. Here's to a winner in the contest, Mike! ~ Gershon Mike Gentile April 27, 2018 at 8:57 AM Thank you Gershon, they are such beautiful creatures !!

Heidi Sands April 21, 2018 at 3:34 PM So nice Mike. I love the ending too :) Mike Gentile April 21, 2018 at 4:42 PM Thanks Heidi, Happy Saturday xxoo!!!

Edward Ibeh April 20, 2018 at 1:15 PM A splendidly penned piece, Mike:-) Good luck in the contest! Mike Gentile April 20, 2018 at 2:14 PM Thank you much, Edward !!!

Vijay Pandit April 20, 2018 at 11:40 AM Beautiful in every respect..your poem flows in rhythm..well written, as always..best for a win, Mike. Mike Gentile April 20, 2018 at 11:42 AM Thank you Vijay, Happy Friday !!!

Darlene De Beaulieu April 20, 2018 at 11:40 AM hello Mike, my imagination sees all the action in this poem. have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo Mike Gentile April 20, 2018 at 11:42 AM Aww, Thanks, Darlene , xxoo

Lin Lane April 20, 2018 at 10:41 AM What wonderful talent you show to interweave the royalty beneath the sea theme... "princely fish, regal rendezvous, azure court, ..." Very skillfully written, Mike. Mike Gentile April 20, 2018 at 11:49 AM Thanks so much Lin, your opinion means a lot, appreciate it xxoo