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A Seahorse Play

In liquid castles, dense and warm These princely equine fish do swarm In peaceful beauty do they reign Among the rainbows near to feign A scarlet mood to chase the sea Of dangers impotent to flee Perhaps a golden tone would do To spark a regal rendezvous A dance of love in sweet comport To decorate the azure court Ensures a stunning dynasty To grace this world for me to see 4/19/18 Contest; Seahorses Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/9/2018 8:31:00 AM

A well-written, lovely, majestic Rhyme, Mike. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 8:44:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sandra xxoo

Julia Ward

Date: 5/9/2018 12:39:00 AM

A right royal write, this! Well done for your win in my "Seahorses" contest, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you so much, Julia, it was great fun xxoo

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/8/2018 11:02:00 PM

Totally charming. Well done, Mike and congrats on a well deserved win.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Line xxoo

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/8/2018 10:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Mike. A lovely seahorse poem. Well done.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 8:43:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 5/8/2018 7:26:00 PM

Marvelous write, Mike, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/8/2018 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2018 1:43:00 AM

Seahorses never had it so good as they have it in your gleaming poetic tribute. Here's to a winner in the contest, Mike! ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/27/2018 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Gershon, they are such beautiful creatures !!

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/21/2018 3:34:00 PM

So nice Mike. I love the ending too :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/21/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, Happy Saturday xxoo!!!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/20/2018 1:15:00 PM

A splendidly penned piece, Mike:-) Good luck in the contest!

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/20/2018 2:14:00 PM

Thank you much, Edward !!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2018 11:40:00 AM

Beautiful in every respect..your poem flows in rhythm..well written, as always..best for a win, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/20/2018 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Vijay, Happy Friday !!!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/20/2018 11:40:00 AM

hello Mike, my imagination sees all the action in this poem. have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/20/2018 11:42:00 AM

Aww, Thanks, Darlene , xxoo

Lin Lane

Date: 4/20/2018 10:41:00 AM

What wonderful talent you show to interweave the royalty beneath the sea theme... "princely fish, regal rendezvous, azure court, ..." Very skillfully written, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/20/2018 11:49:00 AM

Thanks so much Lin, your opinion means a lot, appreciate it xxoo