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A Sea of White

I woke up to the smell Of this beautiful universe Conspiring in favor of me I sit on the balcony And see trees in entirety A canopy of moving white Swaying with the breeze Suddenly as if awakened Blooming flowers take flight A sea of white butterflies Against that bright blue sky Like magnets drawn back Sitting on the top of trees White flowers fluttering Swaying and dancing in eternity 29.7.2021 Sponsor: Regina Mclntosh Contest Name: Finding your Muse.

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Date: 8/5/2021 10:54:00 AM
Lovely Carol an inspiring vision all in "fluttering" white. Congratulations on your win.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/21/2021 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Sam....:)
Date: 8/3/2021 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. I love butterflies. Love your line "A sea of white butterflies Against that bright blue sky." That sounds so pretty. Have a blessed day with this win...............
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/3/2021 9:45:00 AM
Thanks dear Paula.....much love :)
Date: 8/2/2021 5:57:00 PM
I love this. Congrats on your win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/2/2021 11:10:00 PM
Thanks dear Gina....much love :)
Date: 8/2/2021 1:31:00 PM
A wonderful image of butterflies "White flowers fluttering/Swaying and dancing in eternity" - excellent line. Love the title! BW ~ Mala
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/2/2021 11:09:00 PM
Thanks dear Mala....much love :)
Date: 8/2/2021 12:22:00 PM
The white sea wash of butterflies in flight - a superb image. Congratulations on such a memorable write. Cheers, Brian
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/2/2021 11:08:00 PM
Thanks dear Brian....much love :)
Date: 8/2/2021 5:59:00 AM
A sea of white butterflies Against that bright blue sky Like magnets drawn back Sitting on the top of trees Very beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/2/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj.....I am glad I won and you liked it :)

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