Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

A Sea of White

I woke up to the smell
Of this beautiful universe
Conspiring in favor of me
I sit on the balcony
And see trees in entirety
A canopy of moving white 
Swaying with the breeze
Suddenly as if awakened
Blooming flowers take flight
A sea of white butterflies
Against that bright blue sky
Like magnets drawn back 
Sitting on the top of trees
White flowers fluttering 
Swaying and dancing in eternity

29.7.2021
Sponsor: Regina Mclntosh
Contest Name: Finding your Muse.

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Sam Kauffman August 5, 2021 at 10:54 AM Lovely Carol an inspiring vision all in "fluttering" white. Congratulations on your win. Carol Mitra August 21, 2021 at 10:29 PM Thank you Sam....:)

Paula Goldsmith August 3, 2021 at 9:19 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. I love butterflies. Love your line "A sea of white butterflies Against that bright blue sky." That sounds so pretty. Have a blessed day with this win............... Carol Mitra August 3, 2021 at 9:45 AM Thanks dear Paula.....much love :)

Regina Mcintosh August 2, 2021 at 5:57 PM I love this. Congrats on your win. God bless you always, Love, Gina Carol Mitra August 2, 2021 at 11:10 PM Thanks dear Gina....much love :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury August 2, 2021 at 1:31 PM A wonderful image of butterflies "White flowers fluttering/Swaying and dancing in eternity" - excellent line. Love the title! BW ~ Mala Carol Mitra August 2, 2021 at 11:09 PM Thanks dear Mala....much love :)

Brian Sambourne August 2, 2021 at 12:22 PM The white sea wash of butterflies in flight - a superb image. Congratulations on such a memorable write. Cheers, Brian Carol Mitra August 2, 2021 at 11:08 PM Thanks dear Brian....much love :)

Christuraj Alex August 2, 2021 at 5:59 AM A sea of white butterflies Against that bright blue sky Like magnets drawn back Sitting on the top of trees Very beautiful writing. Congratulations on your win! Carol Mitra August 2, 2021 at 7:14 AM Thank you Christuraj.....I am glad I won and you liked it :)