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A Scene From Our City

Loud music and lights on a bridge cut into my consciousness Another city evening has come The heat of the midsummer afternoon has gone away bringing the night people into focus A demi - monde in the heart of the metropolis Wanton women, drunken men and all the bars are open I stay inside and miss the "action" Utilizing my pen I free myself from the dark urban scenario Creativity is a gift to all concernted Pleasure comes to those who dare to express their innermost feelings and through the magic of words touch the souls of kindred spirits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/18/2012 3:14:00 PM
Your poem tells us where the action really dwells - 'in the souls of kindred spirits"
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Date: 11/18/2012 9:17:00 AM
Am sending soup mail.."
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Date: 11/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
Good one from you Matthew, really enjoyed today, hope The rest of your Sunday goes well, Joe..)
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Date: 11/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
i'm sure you've touched many souls with your magic words. i like the fact that even when you stay inside, the sounds of the city float in anyway, so you're still a part of it.
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Date: 11/14/2012 6:14:00 PM
I like this. I'm glad that you stay inside, You might not be missing much. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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