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a scarlet sky

a scarlet sky sillohuettes the moon -- two ospreys descend

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Date: 11/17/2011 1:18:00 PM
Im sorry but your poems are short and weak, you really need to work on making them better and much longer!
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 4:03:00 PM
Nathan, I am practicing a poetry form called haiku. It has a maximum of 17 syllables. Big Smiles. I do write longer poems. lol Ottava rima is a little longer and has a specific rhyme scheme. Sonnets - 14 lines, acrostics vary in length. You might want to look at some of my couplets and quatrains. They often have some length...and interest. BIG SMILES! (You can see the form listed on the right of a poets list of poem.