A Satin Moon

Sometimes I perceive the moon as a pearl; a polished satiny gem. Aloft the world in midnight's pitch, surrounded by myriads of stars... baguettes of celestial diamonds. June 19, 2021 Bite Size Poem No.8 Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Alex Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 11:52 PM
Lovely. Congratulations!
Logan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Thanks, Chris.
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 1:37 PM
Love your interpretation of the moon's appearance and you are so aptly right, well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 6:11 AM
I am delighted with your comments, Jennifer. Thanks!
Shariff Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Jenna, Very well said in few words about the beauty of moon. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Logan Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Hello, Irfanulla, and thank you very much.
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 2:09 AM
A pearl amongst sparkling diamonds, an image I never get tired of seeing. Love your perception Jenna, good luck, Have a lovely Sunday Tom
Logan Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Nor I, Tom. Thank you very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 1:03 AM
I loved your last line. Makes me wonder. HUgs.
Logan Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Thank you, Victor.
Hankins Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Looks like a winner to me, Jenna. Your verse is a finely-shaped gem, indeed.
Logan Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
Thanks so much, Milt.
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 4:24 PM
gorgeous just simply gorgeous, a pearl of a poem into my faves!:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:43 AM
Thanks for the kudos and the fave, Jan.
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