Notes About The Poem
a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow
today,
thinking time
flowing…
no peace,
children dying
in war…
victims,
all those dying
in vain…
iced war,
cold melting life
flowing…
love left,
the war took her
away…
justice
looking…but not
seeing…
a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow
today,
thinking time
flowing…
no peace,
children dying
in war…
victims,
all those dying
in vain…
iced war,
cold melting life
flowing…
love left,
the war took her
away…
justice
looking…but not
seeing…
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