Notes About The Poem

a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow     

                           

    today, 

thinking time

   flowing…

  no peace,

children dying

    in war…

    victims,

all those dying

    in vain…

   iced war,

cold melting life

     flowing…        

    love left,

the war took her

      away…

      justice

looking…but not

       seeing…

  

 

a sane 2-4-2 mixed flow

today, 
thinking time
   flowing…
  no peace,
children dying
    in war…
    victims,
all those dying
    in vain…
   iced war,
cold melting life
     flowing…        
    love left,
the war took her
      away…
      justice
looking…but not
       seeing…
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