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A Sand Castle

Shaping our castles in the sand Where the moon has pulled the tide A place our youthful dreams abide Gone when the surf and sand collide......

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Date: 1/27/2014 11:51:00 PM

Excellent Barbara.....something to be said for these short ones. I love them, too. SuZ

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/28/2014 8:38:00 AM

I am such a fan of the short forms..I tend to nod off after reading the 10th stanza on the same subject. hahaha

Date: 1/25/2014 2:44:00 PM

I really like this one..I like the enclosed rhyme that you used in it..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 1/28/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Sara..You've been writing so very well ..I always look for your work. Hope you are well. BG

Date: 1/22/2014 10:56:00 AM

Very nice and so true, Barbara, that we never stop building castles and letting life tear them down...even when it's 5 degrees out!

Date: 1/21/2014 9:27:00 PM

Cool. Only a few lines, but a nice job of capturing the double application of dreams and sand castles.