A Sand Castle

Shaping our castles in the sand Where the moon has pulled the tide A place our youthful dreams abide Gone when the surf and sand collide......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Delaney Avatar
January 27, 2014 at 11:51 PM
Excellent Barbara.....something to be said for these short ones. I love them, too. SuZ
Gorelick Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:38 AM
I am such a fan of the short forms..I tend to nod off after reading the 10th stanza on the same subject. hahaha
Kendrick Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 2:44 PM
I really like this one..I like the enclosed rhyme that you used in it..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Sara..You've been writing so very well ..I always look for your work. Hope you are well. BG
Fisher Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Very nice and so true, Barbara, that we never stop building castles and letting life tear them down...even when it's 5 degrees out!
Ruff Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 9:27 PM
Cool. Only a few lines, but a nice job of capturing the double application of dreams and sand castles.
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