Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Acrostic

A Sanctuary-Safe and Strong-W

People don’t have to migrate to be citizens to this palace,
Over here life burning well creativity is the ash
Even the poorest gets the best sanctuary
The status not inevitable here in this heaven
Rare infusion of mind and heart, not an illusion
Yearning to write and to be read with pleasure 
Poets, writers, commoners, dreamers old and young
An African-Asian-European-Australian-American all
Lands are free, homes are beaming with activities
A problem of racism unknown, prejudice, malice dead
Come all sane, insane, to record the best or the worst
Eventually let the Goddess of poetry soothe our hearts.



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First place win in:
Contest: Poetry palace sponsored by Linda-Marie

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 4, 2012 at 8:16 AM Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi December 30, 2011 at 2:05 PM Such a nice insight glad to see you amongst the winners Light & Love

Gautami Phookan May 22, 2011 at 8:33 AM Congrats Dr Ram on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Regards, gautami

Kib G May 22, 2011 at 6:29 AM Beautiful write........So So So right!!!!!!! Cause in that peace....We all r welcome.....N that sanctuary is where I've found myself for many years now and no matter the time or the state with in that moment and space I am my strongest.....U said it all!!!!!!!! Its the best yet for me!!!!!!! -Just Wonderful Dr...

Joseph Osita May 20, 2011 at 9:25 AM Awesome! Many congrats on your big win

Emma Buckeridge May 20, 2011 at 3:55 AM Beautiful! :o)

Tahera Mannan May 19, 2011 at 9:03 PM Beautiful Dr. Ram and an honour to share this place with you. Many congrats.

Kash Poet May 19, 2011 at 6:27 PM Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your 1st place win in this contest.

Sara Kendrick May 19, 2011 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on your win with this very expressive work..Sara

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet May 19, 2011 at 2:16 PM Terrific one Dr.Ram.Well deserved 1st.place win.Thanks for the kind comments.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown May 19, 2011 at 12:11 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Cory Long May 19, 2011 at 9:56 AM this was great very well done..congrats on your win. cory

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2011 at 9:16 AM So happy for you, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song May 19, 2011 at 3:54 AM Your equal=opportunity palace took top spot. ongrats again. Gwendolen

Jack Horne May 19, 2011 at 3:25 AM Many congrats on your win, Dr Ram : )

Nette Onclaud May 19, 2011 at 2:38 AM loving the global feel of this , dr.ram.. congrats on the top citation.:) hugggs

Matt Hunt May 18, 2011 at 10:13 PM Congrats to you Dr. Ram for this splendid piece:) R.M.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 9:01 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your first place win in my contest with this creative write .. thankxx for your constant support luv..

Dinda Minardi May 18, 2011 at 8:01 AM Wow!!!

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2011 at 10:09 PM Awesome job of it, Dr. Ram!! You should do very well in the contest.

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr. May 16, 2011 at 5:52 PM I'm feeling this write so much. I totally agree, this community of poets rocks. Writing is one special thing that all of us here have in common. Great write, and thank you for your kind words on my poem "Crystal Death" too.

James Foulk May 16, 2011 at 3:18 PM yes i feel this is a place i can come and feel welcome any time, it is my second home, this was a great piece you wrote Dr Ram, it really lifted me up today. Thank you for reading Then Came the Rains and for your kind comment. as far as those other poems, there is no other poems, when i posted this one, and i went back to look, there were those two blank spaces, so i do i get rid of them?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 16, 2011 at 2:19 PM thankx Dr. Ram for enjoying my family forever poem.. families are big blessings from God..luv.

Carolyn Devonshire May 16, 2011 at 1:23 PM This really is a place where people of all races and ethnicities find common ground and share their thoughts. What always amazes me is how much we have in common with people from other countries. Our hopes, dreams and ambititions are all similar. You did an outstanding job of describing the special quality of Poetry Soup, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George May 16, 2011 at 12:39 PM Wonderful entry of Linda-Marie's contest, Dr. Ram. My best wishes to you. Lainie and thank you for your kind comments.

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