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A Sailor

crisp white uniform like pure white ocean foam his eyes navy blue for he winked at the sea his shoes polished squid-ink black with superior shine his medals proudly gleam the Captain grins, wants to salute him eagerly waits his turn his fellow seaman — some like him others hold the jealousy of Davy Jones Locker but the women love him in droves some with ulterior motives just to be a Navy wife swooping necklines, netted stockings long blond silky hair accost his senses but on the long watches he serves her the one he loves best — his country so he trims his neckline, sharpens the lines of his tailored pants and protects the deck day and night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/1/2019 2:41:00 PM
Superbly done, Kim. congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/1/2019 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/29/2018 2:10:00 AM
Probably you need to make a more interesting finish than protecting the deck day and night, but a good effort, nevertheless. Congratulations on your poem's placement.
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Julia Ward
Date: 12/29/2018 10:09:00 AM
Thank you for your good wishes. A Happy New Year to you, Kim. Julia, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Julia for the constructive critique! Happy New Year!

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