Millard Lowe Poet Senryu

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A SAFE ROUND TRIP DAY

 (Two Senryu Perspectives)

 

                     I

 

Fell asleep last night.

Have no idea where I went;

God, sending me back:-

 

                   II

 

The sun rose and left;

The moon waxed throughout the night;

Sleep waned; I woke up:-

 

A SAFE ROUNDTRIP DAY

A SAFE ROUND TRIP DAY
 (Two Haiku Perspectives)

                     I

Fell asleep last night.
Have no idea where I went;
God, sending me back:-

                   II

The sun rose and left;
The moon waxed throughout the night;
Sleep waned; I woke up:-

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