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A Sad Startling Beauty

--The feeling of after hearing an ancient love story 


Searching love but being desolate

Joy, sadness and pain

A Startling beauty

Unlucky destiny 

For whom sorrow and empty?

Empty lament

A romantic lonely dream.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/31/2024 9:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 12:45:00 PM

yunyan, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Yunyan Gu
Date: 1/29/2016 2:52:00 AM

Thank you very much Linda...Best regards, Yunyan