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A Rusted Soul

~A soul rusted by moisture of arrogance
fails to trace God's magnetic path of attraction.~



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Wilma Neels

March 4, 2012 at 8:34 AM

This is just a beauty Kash, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest :) Wilma

Bob Quigley

March 4, 2012 at 8:20 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 4, 2012 at 6:30 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

March 3, 2012 at 9:39 PM

KASH, Congratulations with your wonderful entry IN RICK'S CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

Debbie Guzzi

March 3, 2012 at 6:57 PM

Something to ponder! congrad's light & love

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2012 at 9:29 PM

Just noticing you got on the winners' list with this one. Congratulations, kash. You know what? I don't think the rust contest this poem was originally intended for ever got judged , did it???

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 15, 2012 at 5:25 AM

Congratulations Kash xx

Poet Destroyer A

February 14, 2012 at 7:29 PM

KASH..CONGRATS...WITH YOUR..HM.... Have a happy valentine days... ~ :-) Always, * PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 14, 2012 at 6:37 PM

I like this a lot. I've never read anything quite like it. Congrats on your win! Happy Valentines with hugs, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2012 at 6:29 PM

Congrats..Way to go..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe

February 14, 2012 at 9:44 AM

Short and sweet, but powerful. Very good, Kash. Congrats on your HM win in Brian's contest.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 14, 2012 at 9:32 AM

congrats Jash on HM for these valuable lines of wisdom luv.. that title just struck me to my soul .. enjoy honor and HVD with luv..

Nette Onclaud

February 14, 2012 at 9:17 AM

big cheers to you my kashi buddy for a superb win.. would have place this higher!..:) huggs!

Dinda Minardi

February 14, 2012 at 7:54 AM

Such a wonderful of your anthology, Kash. Congratulations :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 14, 2012 at 5:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One From Your Anthology" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Bhavna Khemlani

January 14, 2012 at 7:15 AM

A nice and genuine fact! Cheers

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 11, 2012 at 7:43 AM

I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Kash. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Don Johnson

January 1, 2012 at 3:56 PM

mental rust n corrosion does stop the flow, So God's electroflying pulse will not show, till after you've been dying... when it's no use a trying... after you go. thanks kash...

Bl Devnath

December 27, 2011 at 7:13 AM

Very interesting write where you have touched the magnetic path of God. Thanks, for your comment on my write. bl

Laura Breidenthal

December 26, 2011 at 3:29 PM

What an interesting perspective! I enjoyed Always, Laura

M.I.A .

December 25, 2011 at 7:31 PM

Kash, hope you're having a great time. This is awesome, loved every words in it.

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2011 at 9:08 PM

Kash... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Sara Kendrick

December 24, 2011 at 3:40 PM

Good one..Enjoyed reading very much..Some learn too late..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

December 24, 2011 at 11:41 AM

So true, Kash. GREAT take on the contest's theme. I have a silly one to post later. Good luck in the contest, my friend.

Gwendolen Song

December 24, 2011 at 9:25 AM

Totally accurate depiction of this sour attitude, Kash..then their lives just begin corroding. I have someone in my life who did this to me and we are not close at all anymore. Nice title.... ;) Gwendolen

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