A Rude Awakening

Wake up, wake up, it's morning,
A brand new day is dawning.
Did you sleep well?
You look like Hell
Go back to bed, your yawning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 20, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Flattery will get you nowhere, Shirley. Tell the TRUTH! I look like Hell warmed over!!! lol. ~ GQ
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September 20, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Hehe cheeky little number there Shirley!! Debx
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