Charmaine Chircop Poet Free verse

A Rose-Bud Breeze

 I think of you..

An instant swirl
of a rose-bud breeze
descending between 
silence and sleep.

My one and only 
night- time companion.

At last,we're no longer strangers

I know you!
I found you!
I have you!

Fresh manna casacading 
on a slothful pillow

The sweetest contentment released .

A flutter of butterflies
in sync with my heart's
Du-dum,Du-dum,drumming beat .

Yet,words,words fail me,
Pink lips are sealed.
Low voice can't utter 
soft ardent whispers
nor gentle echoes
can return back to recall
 this beauty I see.

My pen can't scribble
the name of the flame
where fire desires to be

Each line is too faint,
Each verse is too bleak,
too bleak to describe you,
and the hundred emotions
which you make me feel.


Inspired by music

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Ink Empress October 5, 2023 at 2:45 AM Dear beautiful talented soul, the way you weave words is so beautiful and creative and touches my soul in a resonating manner so profoundly! I felt it especially as you wrote “ iv found u” i know u i have u” what a most beautiful feeling is that? My pen cant scribble the name of the flame! Awwn! So romantic! Thank u so much for supporting me too

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2023 at 12:58 PM I really like this and the title is so catchy. Good to see this one i had not commented to yet.

S. Wesley Mcgranor February 4, 2022 at 9:19 PM Ew wee!

John Castellenas August 31, 2020 at 11:02 PM Gentle, kind and wonderful words shared dear Charmaine. You could feel the memory and the desire in the words.

Sara Kendrick August 16, 2020 at 1:33 PM Ahhh!! Enjoyed this one today. Sara

Timothy Hicks April 28, 2020 at 6:41 PM Your words paint a delightful and serene scene. With all the giddiness of a first love. (wonder what type of music inspired this?) ... as a side note: I enjoyed your manna line, however, I couldn't figure out anywhere online what "sloughtful" means? Charmaine Chircop June 22, 2020 at 6:56 PM Am glad youike it.Thanks for reading.Slothful is lazy...A lazy pillow :)

Jc Hawkens March 29, 2020 at 7:05 AM This was a real treat. Wonderfully scribed poem. Thank you for this JC Hawkens

Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2020 at 3:04 PM - A lovely poem, Charmaine :) - Take care and stay healthy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 3, 2020 at 3:21 PM Keep listening to your music,,, such lovely words from the heart. Hugs

Tobey Hill February 12, 2020 at 9:42 AM Beautiful work Miss Malta

Charles Messina February 11, 2020 at 4:41 AM This is truly beautiful, Charmaine. So lovely :) Charlie Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2020 at 1:48 PM Thanks so much Charles.

Panagiota Romios February 9, 2020 at 1:05 AM Golly, Charmaine! I am so glad I found this! Your Poetry is a forever-inspiration. Wishing you the best. Panagiota Romios. xx Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2020 at 1:49 PM Thanks so much for your kindness.

Maria Williams February 3, 2020 at 8:38 PM Lovely to see you posting again Charmaine, and what a lovely poem too. I do agree, music brings out the best, and inspires romantic poetry like yours. I love it, a fave for the list....Maria Hugs Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2020 at 1:46 PM Thanks so much sweet lady.

Carolyn Devonshire February 3, 2020 at 5:09 PM Wow, stunning, Charma! I would hate not being able to express my love. Your poem's a fave for me. Hugs, Carolyn Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2020 at 1:45 PM Hi Dear friend.Hope all is well on your side of the moon.Thanks for reading..Hugs :)

Craig Cornish February 3, 2020 at 3:14 PM Missed your romantic expressions - beautiful Charma Charmaine Chircop February 11, 2020 at 1:44 PM Hope you're doing well.Thanks so much Craig.

James A. February 3, 2020 at 8:07 AM Music can be so inspiring...loved the poem. Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2020 at 9:25 AM Thanks for your kindness James :)

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2020 at 2:17 PM Your words indeed express what the imagination conjures in lack of your being able to describe what you feel. This is beautiful Charmaine and is going into my Faves! I can relate. xxoo Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2020 at 9:26 AM Aw..Thanks so much sweet lady.

Paul Callus February 2, 2020 at 1:12 PM Not being able to express what lies within, to liberate those mixed emotions is sad, Charm...and yet it's compensated by the knowledge that love is there, waiting to be fulfilled. ~ A pleasure to have you posting again, my friend. Best regards // paul Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2020 at 9:27 AM Thanks for your kindness Paul.

Silent One February 1, 2020 at 7:22 AM Seems like a special one...Lovely poem we should all feel this way about a beloved...Nice to see you posting .. Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:28 AM Yes we should S.O .Thanks for stopping by :).

Ts Poetry January 31, 2020 at 4:17 PM Music can bring out some wonderful emotions...lovely poem Charma Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:30 AM Indeed TS.Thanks.

Eve Roper January 31, 2020 at 4:13 PM an instant swirl of breeze roused the fingers to dance upon the page. beautiful and very well crafted , Charmain. Hugs Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:31 AM Thanks sweet lady

Chris Green January 31, 2020 at 3:58 PM Wow, this was beautiful...such a long time in between poems but definitely worth the wait. I loved this one my friend, it feels so soft and alluring. Music is certainly a wonderful inspiration. So nice to see you writing again. Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:31 AM Thanks for your kindness Chris.

Keith O.J. Hunt January 31, 2020 at 3:13 PM Sounds like a great love song Charma. Enjoyed reading this evening;-) Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:32 AM Thanks so much Keith

Jan Allison January 31, 2020 at 2:53 PM A joy to read your breath taking lines charma:-) hugs Jan xx Charmaine Chircop February 1, 2020 at 9:33 AM Thanks so much for your kindness Jan.