A Rose With a Thorn

Billy Bob had fallen in love

Consuming his entirety

Awakening his heart ached

Asleep his love passed him by

Though yearning he did not reveal

Valentine's Day loomed so near

Dare he reveal his true feelings

Nothing ventured, nothing gained

Was his one recurring mantra

He bought a card and wrote a name

'Stephan I love you, please be mine'

He inserted a deep red rose

inside the card and posted it

He waited on Valentine's Day

His quaking spirits were soaring

He received a card from Stephan

Revealing feelings were mutual

They arranged to meet after school

to Billy Bob's distress and grief

Heard that his love had that day died

from septicaemia  due to

pricking his finger recently

from the thorn of a deep red rose.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dom Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 9:05 AM
hmmm, a twisted tale of a rose thorn that inpaled...cheers Theresa.
Stephens Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Hi Michael, Thank you for your positive comment and for taking the time to make contact. Regards Theresa xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 1:11 AM
a very interesting tragic story in your poem. I like your creative take on the contest theme.
Stephens Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Hi Andrea, I have learned that in any portrayal the unexpected often catches the eye and interest. Ah! Ah ! Thank you for your positive comment and for taking the time to post it. All the best Theresa xx
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:29 PM
ohhhh such an emotional write - i wasn't expecting that ending! Jan xx
Stephens Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 3:40 AM
Hi Jan, Thank you for kindly commenting. Regards Theresa xx
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