A Room With a View

Worlds come alive at my window melding of nature and man beauty laid out in the palm of a hand the songbird soliloquy unfettered and free playing so elegantly just so I can see the air breathless as honeycomb sway in the tree I mesmerized by the view clouds sifting through the breeze thirty tall sails, open out in the sea the blues, the greens washing towards me romantic red blush sky spelling out my name in new lit stars as night is calling me back home where darkness never comes or goes away there's a knock upon my window the sun sneaks out through the cracks and in through the crimson kisses I am of one but of two sitting near the inner garden under the tree of life the shoots, sprouts, the shouts I admire the view there is lightning and roars of thunder but the rains never come we bask in the sunshine erupting within us for at least another day
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March 4, 2020 at 10:12 PM
WoW! TS, What an amazing view! Each verse and stanza pulled the reader in, and what I saw just lovely. Well done. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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March 5, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Alexis. It is a life changing view
Alhemaidy Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 4:52 AM
It's poetry! Very enjoyed read, have a good time.
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March 1, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thank you AA. It is more than a good time it is a good life.
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February 29, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Very beautiful poetry.
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February 29, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Thank you Arthur..a challenge that is more than just a challenge
Labyrinth Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Dinner at sunset, the delectable table is spread before a vista of deep pink, burnt orange, persimmon and shades of violet blue, below us emeralds linger towards the sapphire of life, real, shining and rippling, the flow, alabaster sailed tall ships out the window sail on dreams towards us, a room with a view and a bridge inviting the muse to cross, to stay and whisper southern operatic tunes to the Siren. An eagle, wings extended intense, hovers outside, considers the feast, then flies through the open window. x
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March 1, 2020 at 1:12 PM
We are all surrounded by angels Schmidt. I know you are keeping your eyes on me. xx
Poetry Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 7:39 AM
Tell the angels to keep an eye on you.
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March 1, 2020 at 12:10 AM
https://youtu.be/eai_6DXKXtA
Labyrinth Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:10 AM
Don't worry about the sharks, we have angels in the ocean with us here...
Poetry Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 11:21 PM
Lol
Labyrinth Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 10:52 PM
I'll have a word with them....make sure they stay in their cages.
Poetry Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:42 PM
I'll stay clear of the sharks
Labyrinth Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 6:33 PM
you've got wings, you'll fly through the window with a territorial whoosh....try not to get hooked on the coat hanger...the dolphins are watching...;)
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February 29, 2020 at 6:31 PM
Meet you at the bow
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February 29, 2020 at 2:36 PM
https://youtu.be/ALLuI1OHs-w
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February 29, 2020 at 4:29 PM
https://youtu.be/w0Ww5LoAwfQ
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:52 AM
what outstanding imagery TS you certainly take me to another word with your wonderful words:-) Happy weekend:-) hugs Jan xx
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February 29, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Thanks Jan have a nice weekend as well..we are having a taste of spring here
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