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A Romantic Tune

You played a romantic tune on the chord of my heart. Such blissful melody only true love can impart. I could feel the booming love beat flowing through my veins. Each drop of my blood is in rhythm of your love's reign. You saturated me with your love, you're my sweetheart. I am bound to the sacred music of our love chart, playing every musical note of love part by part. Every upbeat of our love is leading to new gains. You played a romantic tune… We are in the musical track of our love, apart from the world looking for an ecstasy to depart. We are together in harmony as one, not twain. Pitch of our rollicking lovely music is insane. It turned out to be an eternal grandiose art. You played a romantic tune… 08/27/2016 Note : For the contest (Best love poem ever) by Laura Loo. *Placed Second*

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2017 3:28:00 PM

Way to go with your fine rondeau, and a big belated congratulations on your win!

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/9/2017 11:08:00 PM

It is 1 of my favorites. Thank you so very much, Andrea. I am humbled by your kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2017 3:27:00 PM

here is one on your "best poems" list here at Soup. i see it is one of your favorites for romance, let me read it.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 2:14:00 PM

Hi Afzal, What a beautiful love poem. I really enjoyed your lovely music. Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest . It was well deserved. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker
Date: 12/11/2016 11:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Alexis. I appreciate your visits & comments, wholeheartedly.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/29/2016 4:58:00 AM

A lovely rondeau so well written, Afzal:) congratulations on your win:)

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/29/2016 5:54:00 AM

Thank you very much for stopping by, Jo and thanks for the encouraging compliment.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/28/2016 11:41:00 AM

Afzal, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/28/2016 12:09:00 PM

It was a sheer delight writing for your contest. Thank you very much for encouraging me and putting me in a position with such prolific poets. I am genuinely grateful.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/27/2016 11:06:00 PM

Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this fabulous write and the form. :) Sunita

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/27/2016 11:18:00 PM

Thank you, Sunita.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2016 12:14:00 PM

SO nice AFZAL...like the use of saturated

Afzal Nusker
Date: 8/27/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tim.