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A romantic dream

This world can be cruel and people unkind but love is a jewel Each of us can find Desperately lonely He's feeling alone The explorer is searching For someone of his own . He'll search forever If that is what he must do To build a life together With the love he feels is true Through disease and sickness Heartbreak and pain Once his heart is given In love he'll remain. So he travels the oceans Across borders and skies Following his heart For its there all truth lies Time has no meaning Forever has no face Be it determination or dreaming He roams place to place . If his heart is to be sated He'll find what was meant to be So long fate has waited To find love eternally Then they'll build a new life Into the country they'll flee A simple man and his new wife Escaping life's misery . In the midst of a forest A new log cabin they erect Building a new life of beauty Built on love and respect . Families will grow strong here True love will thrive They will work together For the rest of their lives . True friends are welcome To visit our idyllic scene We'll even help them If they wish to share in our dream. For any poem#17 Sponsor Poet destroyer A

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Date: 5/6/2014 6:03:00 PM
darren, hope to see you at one of my food quiz blogs soon!! I have a new one tomorrow coming. In the meantime, do you have a favorite soup?
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Date: 5/3/2014 10:59:00 PM
On My Darren.. what a wonderful POEM.. great poetry... a true artist you are.. I can tell it is written from the heart.. I love it. hugs Brooke
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Date: 4/20/2014 1:12:00 PM
this is beautiful, loved it. congrats on the well deserved win
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:47:00 PM
Nice win Darren... Congratulations... Verlena
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Date: 4/18/2014 3:06:00 PM
Hello Darren, Well this is my number one poem. and I was LIKE WOW! WOW. CONGRATULATIONS... ... by the way I have something to say to all who supported my ANY POEM # 19 contest. Shame on me, Shame on me! Please forgive me, for not taking the time, to CONGRATULATE and adore all the winning poems for a second or third time. I AM VERY LATE:(-- I was a little mad at the world. However, this is my winning list, I will give everyone the same love and support. I'm dropping by with a Copy Paste note from the bottom of my heart. I am sorry, it's not like me, to walk away, as if nothing. Truly, I appreciate every winning poem, and HM. LOVE ~LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2014 11:19:00 PM
this is a splendid and beautiful dream. You are at your romantic best here, Darren. Congrats for your top win!!
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Date: 4/17/2014 9:51:00 PM
First time I read it I knew it was a winner - I do hope you find the one you are looking for. Well done Darren! Hugs as ever Jan xx
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Date: 4/17/2014 7:47:00 PM
Darren this is great. Hope your romantic dream comes true ...Seren
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Date: 4/17/2014 1:17:00 PM
What an accomplishment Darren...I hope you find who you search for
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Date: 4/17/2014 7:51:00 AM
Hope every dreams can come true...a loving husband, happy and contented life... I love your "romantic dream", Dave..!!! It gives hope to my heart.. :O) CONGRATULATIONS!!! and thank you for leaving my poem a sweet congrats.. ^_^
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Date: 4/17/2014 7:25:00 AM
Your 'romantic dream' is @ home @ medal plaza's highest podest. Found something of my own in your words(..) TY for that. Congrats on THIS write & WIN Dutch Greetings Elly
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Date: 4/17/2014 5:48:00 AM
:) touching splendid write :) i can see myself in this...... :) keep believing and never ever stop praying.. :) ....---olive_eloisa :)
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Date: 4/17/2014 4:15:00 AM
Beautiful write Darren; love comes when least expected...that's why dreams can also come true. // congrats on this merited win. // paul
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Date: 4/17/2014 2:43:00 AM
Darren lovely n heartfelt ! poem not to be missed n worth top win! Congrats on great win !!
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Date: 4/8/2014 1:26:00 PM
You got the essence, Darren :)
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Date: 4/8/2014 11:39:00 AM
Beautifully penned Darren have read it through twice now - - am sure many people wish it was like this and they could escape only to find their dreams shattered by whatever life throws at us. Good luck in the contest. hugs Jan x
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