A Romance With Electrons

How could hands touch with 
such tender velocity! 
Eyes, with bolts of lightning, 
electric.
Yet have the softest, velvet
synchronicity?
That WestCoast night, hearts 
bound and eclectic

Your arms about my waist, 
in the windows, fog-glossed 
reflection.
A moment’s, Monet’ sacred 
masterpiece!
That cried out for human creation.
Of you, of me, to bring to life,
a being in God’s own time and divination.


                

               12/31/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kiser Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Quite a passionate penning, beautiful lines and sentiments.
Cunningham Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 12:59 AM
A poem of fire and deep passion but with a touch of soft velvet. Tom
Romios Avatar
January 3, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Love your comment, tom Thank you. PANGIE
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 8:18 PM
Shocking! Sparks of love! The title caught my attention, and the poem kept it. Unique idea. Thanks, gw
Romios Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 1:53 AM
I liked the time too. What is better than love? Pangie
Kiser Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 4:06 PM
OH this speaks; beautiful lines.
Romios Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 1:50 AM
HNY ML... thank you... Panagiota
DiMino Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Very beautiful, Pangie! You get a Fav!
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Prince DeMino.bless you for FAVING, I really like this one, too Gratefully Panagiota
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 8:36 AM
Love this one, and I sure know THIS feeling!
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 9:54 AM
I am sooo glad you commented, and you shared your own experience. Love is the best! Gratefully Pangie
Gilmour Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Wow Panagiota such exquisite words - and what a start to a new year - you are truly on fire...xx
Romios Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 10:20 PM
Ann, hope I did well. You are correct, I am on fire!)) I hope your Eve was splendid! Love Pangie xx
Awtry Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Wowza Pangie! this is stunning! just beautiful :)
Romios Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 10:15 PM
PS...i really like how it turnedout..i wish to thank you, Sleep well. Pangie
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