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A Road Still Driven

Languished at the end of my cavity
Abandoned in neurotic presumptions
In time disappear without a whisper
The silence humming sore

A solely who lives without a role
A soul bewildered, unstable

The soul which yearn for the color of sky
Souls which howling for a vivid

Occasional rustle awaken by the rhythm of mind
Not much but longitudinally drilled within the sense

It is an art which lasting
Continuously, persistently
Though the monotony unable to kill the instincts of a poet

Even if she wanted to ...

The role of enlighten soul reborn behind the turbulence of a spirit
Once it stood as a strong independence of a privacy
Unable be asleep nor raped
It's still there evaporating my life

This road which still driven
The long journey of a poet
Forget how this start, unsure when it ends
I prefer to drive it along as long as I could live


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                                               8th Place
                                 "A Road Still Driven" Contest
                                   Sponsor	Michael J. Falotico

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/13/2012 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest Yanny. Love, Carol
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/13/2012 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Carol, great to see you stopping by :D
Date: 12/11/2012 3:06:00 AM
Very well penned Yanny! The poet's path is one that's not easy to understand. But once you're called to it, few can refuse to answer. Congrats on your win!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/11/2012 3:19:00 AM
Thank's Vicky, you really got the point of my poem, you are awesome! :D
Date: 12/11/2012 1:21:00 AM
Big congratulations Yanny love, knew you would be in the winners box xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/11/2012 1:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Mandy, your comments are really uplifting my spirit more in writing :D
Date: 12/10/2012 10:24:00 PM
wow, way to go in the contest. Super congratulations to you, Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/11/2012 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, your greeting is super exciting too for me :D
Date: 12/10/2012 10:14:00 PM
Hi Yanny, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/11/2012 1:46:00 AM
Thank you PD, your present is uplifting as always :D
Date: 12/10/2012 4:24:00 PM
Way to go Yanny! Excellent Poem. I really like it.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/10/2012 4:49:00 PM
Thank you Richard, really glad to have a visit by you today :D
Date: 12/10/2012 4:01:00 PM
Congrats on 8th place in my contest.. hugs from Santa Michael
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/10/2012 4:48:00 PM
Lol, thank's Santa, you make my day! I am really enjoying your contest Mr.Santa :D -hug yanny
Date: 12/10/2012 3:30:00 PM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/10/2012 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Luci for your kindly visit, your comment is always encouraging :) - hug, yanny
Date: 12/10/2012 2:26:00 PM
Yanny, good luck in the contest...love it..pd
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/10/2012 3:27:00 PM
Thank's Linda, I'm glad that you like it :D

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