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A Road Still Driven

Languished at the end of my cavity
Abandoned in neurotic presumptions
In time disappear without a whisper
The silence humming sore

A solely who lives without a role
A soul bewildered, unstable

The soul which yearn for the color of sky
Souls which howling for a vivid

Occasional rustle awaken by the rhythm of mind
Not much but longitudinally drilled within the sense

It is an art which lasting
Continuously, persistently
Though the monotony unable to kill the instincts of a poet

Even if she wanted to ...

The role of enlighten soul reborn behind the turbulence of a spirit
Once it stood as a strong independence of a privacy
Unable be asleep nor raped
It's still there evaporating my life

This road which still driven
The long journey of a poet
Forget how this start, unsure when it ends
I prefer to drive it along as long as I could live


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                                               8th Place
                                 "A Road Still Driven" Contest
                                   Sponsor	Michael J. Falotico
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's "A Road Still Driven" contest Yanny. Love, Carol
Widjanarko Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 4:42 PM
Thank you Carol, great to see you stopping by :D
Tsiluma Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:06 AM
Very well penned Yanny! The poet's path is one that's not easy to understand. But once you're called to it, few can refuse to answer. Congrats on your win!
Widjanarko Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 3:19 AM
Thank's Vicky, you really got the point of my poem, you are awesome! :D
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Big congratulations Yanny love, knew you would be in the winners box xx
Widjanarko Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:52 AM
Thank you very much Mandy, your comments are really uplifting my spirit more in writing :D
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:24 PM
wow, way to go in the contest. Super congratulations to you, Yanny.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:48 AM
Thank you Andrea, your greeting is super exciting too for me :D
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Hi Yanny, it is nice to see you on Michael's winning list... a warm congratulations and good night~:-) PD
Widjanarko Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:46 AM
Thank you PD, your present is uplifting as always :D
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Way to go Yanny! Excellent Poem. I really like it.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Richard, really glad to have a visit by you today :D
Falotico Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:01 PM
Congrats on 8th place in my contest.. hugs from Santa Michael
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:48 PM
Lol, thank's Santa, you make my day! I am really enjoying your contest Mr.Santa :D -hug yanny
Carrillo Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:30 PM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Thank you Luci for your kindly visit, your comment is always encouraging :) - hug, yanny
A   Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 2:26 PM
Yanny, good luck in the contest...love it..pd
Widjanarko Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Thank's Linda, I'm glad that you like it :D
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