A River of Tears

You are the sun
Shinning down on me 
You are the rain 
Falling on my skin
You are the wind 
Whispering in my ears

A Short Poem Contest
Sponsored by:  Judy Konos
Written by: Shannon Deane
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 21, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Love the message and the way it shouts in just a few words... give me some time and I shall check out more over the weekend.... enjoyed much.... luv Michael
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