A Risky Revelation

Let you come someday soon!        To my lonely cottage in the village outskirt.      We sit in evening in the moonlight     At the eastern jungle-side window.                      Ah! As it is november, caress eachother                 And kiss                      Under a hairy blanket;          Having salad and slices of fried fish, And slow sips of some costly drink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 8:37 AM
lovely romantic write - not sure about the hairy blanket though lol :-) Hugs Jan xx
Bhat Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Thanku jan...hugs
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Very romantic love thoughts here Fayaz. Very Very nic mood love poem! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Bhat Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Hugs to you hony potter
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