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A Risky Revelation

Let you come someday soon! To my lonely cottage in the village outskirt. We sit in evening in the moonlight At the eastern jungle-side window. Ah! As it is november, caress eachother And kiss Under a hairy blanket; Having salad and slices of fried fish, And slow sips of some costly drink.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/23/2014 8:37:00 AM
lovely romantic write - not sure about the hairy blanket though lol :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Fayaz Bhat
Date: 11/23/2014 9:12:00 AM
Thanku jan...hugs
Date: 11/23/2014 7:44:00 AM
Very romantic love thoughts here Fayaz. Very Very nic mood love poem! A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Fayaz Bhat
Date: 11/23/2014 9:11:00 AM
Hugs to you hony potter

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