A Rippling Dance

Undulation flows amid the aqua in silver, whitecap water spray.











2-14-2023
A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest
JCB Brul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 1:26 PM
Oh, your poem smells wonderful. I love the smell and sound of the ocean. It is such a sensory experience even when you close your eyes.
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:32 PM
so beautiful. Congrats.
Kiser Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Thank you.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 4:51 AM
What an exotic rippling dance my friend amidst the aqua which takes on a silvery look and from it comes a whitecap watery spray - wish I was by the sea right now! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 3:43 PM
It can be such a serene place, the sea. Thank you.
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 9:11 PM
"aqua in silver" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Kiser Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Thank you.
Agustin Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:58 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Kiser Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Beata.
Kauffman Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Such a vivid picture of vibrant images ML! I can feel the sea spray and hear the waves. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Kiser Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 4:23 PM
Thank you Sam.
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 9:26 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest -
Kiser Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 2:15 AM
- Truly a rippling dance...this one was great !!!
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