A Rippling Dance

Undulation flows amid the aqua in silver, whitecap water spray. 2-14-2023 A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest JCB Brul

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:32:00 PM

so beautiful. Congrats.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/24/2023 9:04:00 AM

Thank you.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/19/2023 4:51:00 AM

What an exotic rippling dance my friend amidst the aqua which takes on a silvery look and from it comes a whitecap watery spray - wish I was by the sea right now! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/19/2023 3:43:00 PM

It can be such a serene place, the sea. Thank you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2023 9:11:00 PM

"aqua in silver" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/19/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank you.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2023 7:58:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2023 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Beata.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/17/2023 9:35:00 AM

Such a vivid picture of vibrant images ML! I can feel the sea spray and hear the waves. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2023 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Sam.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2023 9:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest -

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/17/2023 4:24:00 PM

Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2023 2:15:00 AM

- Truly a rippling dance...this one was great !!!