A Ripple To Me

My fingers love to ripple down her long blonde curly hair
Date Written: 2/17/2023
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 2/21/2023 5:34:00 PM
Sweetness in this one! Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 8:47:00 PM
So sweet! Congrats on you win, Paula, with this heart warming piece
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my Monoku write heart warming. That makes me happy. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 4:01:00 PM
So darling!! Congrats
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:10:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 7:24:00 AM
Sweet Paula. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:09:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 5:59:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest win, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:09:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you came back. It is always good to see you. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/20/2023 5:23:00 AM
Very cute - is that maybe your daughter - or a close relation. Whoever they are you created an awesome, vivid picture of a ripple. HUGS & BLESSINGS Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:07:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you have a vivid picture of my ripple. That makes me very happy. It is just a write, not true. Hugs.... Have a great day...................
Date: 2/19/2023 9:42:00 PM
That's so sweet, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 3:04:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/18/2023 12:53:00 PM
lovely verse, Paula..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/19/2023 10:50:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Have a great day...................
Date: 2/17/2023 8:16:00 PM
Oh how lovely :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:42:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great day/weekend.................
Date: 2/17/2023 7:15:00 PM
It must be your grandchild. Lovely imagery of a special moment Paula. Nicely written..xoxo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed my fun write. It was just a write. Not about a grandchild. Have a great day/weekend.................
Date: 2/17/2023 1:25:00 PM
Ahh!! I wonder if it is a child or grandchild. Thanks for sharing. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed my write. It was just a write. Not about a child or grandchild. Have a great day/weekend.................
Date: 2/17/2023 12:11:00 PM
- Sweet and lovely, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this sweet write. Hugs... Have a great day/weekend.................
Date: 2/17/2023 11:26:00 AM
Hello Paula, I can vision the fingers ripple down her hair. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/22/2023 3:43:00 PM
Hello Paula, you are welcome. I can vision your fun. Thank you. I hope you had a great day. Freezing rain tomorrow. I am nt going out. Hugs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you can vision my fun write. Hugs... Have a great day/weekend.................
Date: 2/17/2023 11:16:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, a lovely Monoku, and stunning scenery, Paula. Good luck with the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/18/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your note, kind words and good luck. You made my day. It was a fun to write. Have a great day/weekend.................
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