A Ripple To Me

My fingers love to ripple down her long blonde curly hair
Date Written: 2/17/2023
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:34 PM
Sweetness in this one! Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:17 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great day...................
Seeker Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:47 PM
So sweet! Congrats on you win, Paula, with this heart warming piece
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:16 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my Monoku write heart warming. That makes me happy. Have a great day...................
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 4:01 PM
So darling!! Congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:10 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great day...................
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 7:24 AM
Sweet Paula. Congratulations on your win! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Have a great day...................
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Back with congratulations on your contest win, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you came back. It is always good to see you. Have a great day...................
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Very cute - is that maybe your daughter - or a close relation. Whoever they are you created an awesome, vivid picture of a ripple. HUGS & BLESSINGS Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:07 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you have a vivid picture of my ripple. That makes me very happy. It is just a write, not true. Hugs.... Have a great day...................
Daniel Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 9:42 PM
That's so sweet, Paula:)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 3:04 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Have a great day...................
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 12:53 PM
lovely verse, Paula..
Goldsmith Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my Monoku write. Have a great day...................
Chuuk Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Oh how lovely :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great day/weekend.................
Tor Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 7:15 PM
It must be your grandchild. Lovely imagery of a special moment Paula. Nicely written..xoxo
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed my fun write. It was just a write. Not about a grandchild. Have a great day/weekend.................
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Ahh!! I wonder if it is a child or grandchild. Thanks for sharing. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:39 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed my write. It was just a write. Not about a child or grandchild. Have a great day/weekend.................
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 12:11 PM
- Sweet and lovely, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:38 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed this sweet write. Hugs... Have a great day/weekend.................
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 11:26 AM
Hello Paula, I can vision the fingers ripple down her hair. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Hello Paula, you are welcome. I can vision your fun. Thank you. I hope you had a great day. Freezing rain tomorrow. I am nt going out. Hugs.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Thanks for your note. So glad you can vision my fun write. Hugs... Have a great day/weekend.................
Poet Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Wonderful poetry, a lovely Monoku, and stunning scenery, Paula. Good luck with the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thanks for your note, kind words and good luck. You made my day. It was a fun to write. Have a great day/weekend.................
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