A Ripple In Time

a ripple in time
opens the escape into
the distant past
to visit memories lived
with those who have gone to dust
while present moments
become forever lost in
a ripple in time


(inspired by care giving for my mother who has alzheimers)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 18, 2013 at 9:07 PM
a nice ripple in time winning poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Gail's winning poem... Always & Forever xox~ Linda
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May 15, 2013 at 11:23 AM
a nice A Ripple In time winning poem :-) Congrats *LUV ~SKAT~
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May 14, 2013 at 7:11 PM
While inspired by a tragic disease...still a beautiful tribute and write...congratulations
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May 14, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Poignantly presented.. Congrats on your win. I wish you hadn't had to write this one... Jake
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