Get Your Premium Membership

A Ripple In Time

An angel kissed a ripple Onto a glassy sea And in that very instant A baby came to be A hundred times she kissed it A hundred thousand more Each time the troubled surface More troubled than before The ripples started crossing And people crossing too In time made each their ripple Like as that ocean blue So here is my petition Oh Jesus, hear my plea! That all my parting wavelets Be marked in time for Thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/18/2013 9:06:00 PM
a nice ripple in time winning poem... it was a joy coming back here to read all of Gail's winning poem... Always & Forever xox~ Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2013 11:23:00 AM
a nice A Ripple In time winning poem :-) Congrats *LUV ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2013 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations Isaiah ...beautiful ...
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2013 2:53:00 PM
Preciously stated and deserving of the placement in this competition. Very impressive. Very well done....Jake
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2013 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win with this gem. Nice one, Isaiah. :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/29/2013 10:21:00 AM
- Just lovely, Isaiah! - Unique! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2013 10:27:00 AM
I love this work...Your take on the topic is unique. Best wishes~A.O
Login to Reply
Date: 4/27/2013 1:27:00 AM
This is an exceptional piece of poetry. I love the ocean-- and the way you have used the' ripple' as a methaphor for life is very emotive-- Your Faith is what inspires me most.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2013 10:47:00 PM
I love to think of the sea as kisses of angels. Great imagination Suz
Login to Reply
Date: 4/26/2013 8:33:00 AM
It isn't that hard, and yes i like to be humorus but in person i'm very shy, (this is a wonderful poem, so perfects, with perfect words)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 7:08:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderful! I LOVE the first two lines. Very creative take on this contest, Isaiah!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2013 7:21:00 PM
A real special write Isaiah ...
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2013 3:27:00 PM
This was extremely creative Isaiah, I loved how you have done this awesome write! Keep up these clever poems, I really enjoy reading them! Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2013 3:17:00 PM
A very creative analogy poem, Isaiah. I enjoyed this one.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things