A Ride


My dog and I took a ride
A beautiful, bright, sunny day
Bold blue sky was decorated with white clouds,
floating above the green farm land
The temperature was perfect
We were free as the wind upon our faces
I visited a sweet candy shop with penny candy
We walked by yellow and purple flowers
The two of us made the best of it
Peace, quiet and calming solitude
Both of us happy, riding along
A ride to keep in memory now
No stress, not a worry, just smiles
My companion, so smart, so happy,
filled with endless unconditional love
A ride through life and nothing else mattered

Heidi Sands

8/29/26

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August 30, 2026 at 5:07 AM
Your excellent poem provides a charming glimpse of a happy day spent with a cherished dog, Heidi. The imagery of a bright, sunny day with a striking blue sky and clouds drifting across verdant fields creates a serene, welcoming ambiance.
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August 30, 2026 at 6:44 AM
Thank you so much Sotto :)
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August 30, 2026 at 4:57 AM
A warm, sunlit free-verse memory filled with gentle, restorative details. The bright sky, flowers, candy shop, and open farmland create a lovely sense of simple freedom, while the dog’s steadfast, unconditional love gives the ride its tender emotional heart.
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August 30, 2026 at 6:43 AM
Thank you Alison :)
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