A Riddle Be From Me

An ambulance screeches to the hospital entrance,
In a mortuary van lies’ the father, such a senseless
Accident - child bleeding is rushed into theatre
The surgeon arrives’ goes up the elevator,
Sees patient, this is my son, operating would be reckless!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 8, 2019 at 12:15 PM
WoW Jennifer. Great little mind twister. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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February 4, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Yes, it got me the first time I heard it, thanks for visiting and commenting Judy. Blessings, Jennifer.
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August 10, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Hi Jennifer, The surgeon see's her worst nightmare. Her husband was murdered and her son is in a critical state. I don't know, I can be way in left field. I still want to know who murdered her husband? And who shot or stabbed the son? Were they out for revenge?Wow! I've never seen a limerick like this before. Excellent job - Alexis
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August 10, 2019 at 2:55 PM
I apologise my friend. I should have kept the answer to the riddle to myself. I had to read it several times though. Next time when you do another, I won't be so quick to answer it:-) Alexis
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August 10, 2019 at 10:41 AM
You and Vijay got it - congrats - the surgeon was the mother. Father and son were involved in an accident but the father died from his injuries, the son was rushed to hospital and the surgeon was called to do an emergency operation on the patient, who is her son - she could not do it as she was too emotionally involved! Well pondered! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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August 9, 2019 at 7:51 AM
... :))) ... I read this yesterday ... I would wait until someone gave me the answer ......? -? -? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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August 10, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Hi Sunshine Smile Vijay and Alexis thought out the riddle, the surgeon was the mother. Love and hugs, Jenny.
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August 9, 2019 at 1:34 AM
Hi there, thank you all for the visits, but will have to keep you all guessing - someone will think of the answer. love Jenny.
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August 8, 2019 at 11:36 PM
I do not get the riddle but regardless I like the write... so many pondering thoughts now ... good poem
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August 10, 2019 at 10:48 AM
Hi Sandra, the surgeon was the mother, people still tend to think a surgeon is a man. Thanks for the visit my friend. Hugs, Jennifer.
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August 8, 2019 at 6:57 PM
This has happened before Jennifer and I can only imagine the horror felt. I didn't catch the riddle, but then I am slow on the uptake of jokes Jennifer. xxoo
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August 10, 2019 at 11:10 AM
I'm much the same Connie, this is one of the few I know - the mother is the surgeon and alexis and Vijay got it right. thanks for the visit, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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August 8, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Has me puzzled, too. Panagiota
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August 10, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Hi panagiota - mum is the surgeon! Love and hugs, Jenny.
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August 8, 2019 at 4:56 PM
I'm going to sleep on this one , its got me Foxed. Hang on is the patient who is a father the son of the surgeon and already dead? Tom. Am I even close lol
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August 10, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Hi Tom, the surgeon is the mother - most of us think of the surgeon as a man - Alexis and Vijay got it. Thanks for the visit and trying - blessings, Jennifer.
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August 8, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Cleverly done my friend--I know the answer to this riddle, but don't wish to spoil it for your reader..let them ponder..written so well, Jennifer.
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August 10, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Thanks for keeping all guessing Vijay, Alexis got it, funny people still tend to think of a surgeon as being a man and mentioning a woman confuses the issue. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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August 9, 2019 at 1:27 AM
That's cool thank-you Vijay - Lets keep them guessing! Hugs and blessing, jennifer
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