A Ribbon Of Gold

A ribbon of gold gilds cascading waves of blue. And with a searing kiss, Sol bids the sea adieu. Slippery shadows slide, slipping between ripples. And Luna starts to tug upon the rising tide. Its rusty hull, tangled in an old fishing net. A wind-wrecked derelict fades to a silhouette. A shiny silver moon gets tarnished by the Night. And where darkness gathers, Dusk douses Day's last light. An orange horizon underscores Sol's descent. And stars start to twinkle: with His regal consent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Wow! Beautiful, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hicks Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Your original expressions are almost whimsical ... they bring up images like a kid's coloring book (in a good way). You are a wonderful wordsmith, expressing different angles to imagine this scene... though I'm surprised you didn't say "Luna" since you we got "Sol". Beautiful pen...
Pinet Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Thanks Timothy, you know what...I like your suggestion and have modified my poem accordingly. Emile.
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