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A Rhyming Wave Poem - a Childhood Memory

Nightingales, a pair, dueting,
A pair, dueting, dueting.
Music, beauty, unrelenting.
Music, true love it stirred.

They sang with passion, true love flared,
Old true love, true love, true love flared.
Touching where only true love dared.
Touching, old tender hearts.

Late childhood, yes, watching mum, dad,
Yes, watching, watching, watching dad.
A secret still, man, I am glad!
A secret, oh, what if?

Nightingales, a pair, dueting,
A secret, oh, what if?
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04/24/18

ANY RHYME FORM - AN EARLY CHILDHOOD MEMORY - Poetry Contest, sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Eve Roper April 25, 2018 at 9:09 PM Congratulations on your win, Mick, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`* Mick Talbot April 26, 2018 at 3:14 AM Many thanks Eve, appreciated... hugs Mick

Janis Medders Tobechi April 25, 2018 at 6:04 PM This has a lovely melodic quality about it almost like a summer night. Congratulations. Mick Talbot April 26, 2018 at 3:13 AM Many thanks Sian, appreciated... Mick

Susan Gentry April 25, 2018 at 5:30 PM Congratulations on your placement with this done of memories. Mick Talbot April 26, 2018 at 3:12 AM Many thanks Susan, appreciated... Mick

Paul Callus April 25, 2018 at 12:06 PM A striking childhood memory, undulating through the corridors of a poetic mind. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier April 25, 2018 at 10:42 AM Very original and sweet. Congrats, Mick. Well penned. Mick Talbot April 26, 2018 at 3:11 AM Many thanks Line, appreciated... Mick

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2018 at 7:02 PM This is very sweet, Mick. Hope to see you on the winners' list! Mick Talbot April 26, 2018 at 3:08 AM Playing catch up, it did thanks Andrea, not sure on placement yet, but I well chuffed to see a new form for P.S, to be placed in a contest, woot, woot! Mick