A Rhyming Poem

Where do I start
Rhyming is my game
Trying something different
Just wouldn't be the same

Sometimes words come easy
That's not always true
I try to tell a story
Of me or maybe you

I don't know where it comes from
I don't know where it goes
But the final destination...
"HEY". Nobody knows

Rockman  :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/1/2012 2:46:00 PM
as a fellow rhymer, i can appreciate what you're saying here and i agree wholeheartedly! thank you for your wonderfully supportive comments on my poems - much appreciated! we rhymers have to stick together...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2012 7:13:00 AM
a poetic adventure Rockman.. light and lilting lines to uplift the reader.. so appreciate your sweet critique' of my work.. I was named "Sweetheart" of P.S. by H.G.Garvey Esquire ..a premier poet here when I first joined in 2009..the name stuck so I try to live up to the meaning of the word..hope this clarifies for u luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2012 5:57:00 PM
Sometimes I know where the poem is going, sometimes I don't, that's for sure!! After being here awhile, I agree with you, rhyming is usually more fun to read at least, although there are some mighty fine free verse poems to read as well! Thanks for visiting Dark Angel. I certainly did not have Dark Knight in my mind when I wrote it, but it is strange how it coincides with that dark event in our history!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/5/2012 12:01:00 AM
This is pretty much the way I write my poetry too. It comes and I have to write it down. Thanks for reading and commenting on my latest posting. I meant to show two would be lovers who had been just missing each other and had not yet met. One is searching the other is waiting and longing. Very young and idealistic they are. I will read more of you soon. It's been a long day. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/14/2012 1:08:00 AM
Really we never know how words come come to our pen .it is a miracle .nice and unique concept .thank you for sharing .jk
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2012 9:04:00 PM
nice piece Rockman
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2012 3:21:00 PM
You manage to say what I often feel and it's not getting easier. It is nice to know someone else can't always get it together.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/24/2012 5:52:00 PM
Please don't ever try to change! You were made to rhyme. I love it! :)
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter