Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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A Rhyme In Sixty - the River and the Moon

The river’s a ribbon on which we row.

The moon is a placid blossom of gold,

for we, passion-souled, imagine it so!


Mirrored in water’s each soft rippling fold

is Luna’s lovely pale petal-faced glow

and we are sailing on blue silk’s smooth flow!


Jan. 28, 2017 for the Contest of Laura Loo

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Barry Stebbings February 3, 2017 at 1:13 PM This is lovely, Andrea. The moon and reflections go so well together. Congratulations // Barry

David Bose February 3, 2017 at 9:56 AM Very serene, Andrea. Stirs up nice memories of the moon reflecting on summer nights. Nice job, thanks, Dave

James Inman February 3, 2017 at 7:49 AM Wonderful imagery Andrea. Sorry I haven't been around as much as I would like.

Janice Canerdy February 2, 2017 at 9:25 PM Absolutely lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your win! Janice

Larry Bradfield February 2, 2017 at 8:56 PM Beautifully done!..Larry

Sushma A. Singh February 2, 2017 at 8:18 PM Congrats to u n thanks for your visits and lovely comments on my poems

Charlie Smith February 2, 2017 at 11:52 AM Congratulations Andrea...

Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 4:13 PM Andrea, you have such a gift for enormous imagery.....congratulations on your win!

Joseph May February 1, 2017 at 2:36 PM Congrats on your win Andrea

Frederic Parker February 1, 2017 at 1:53 PM A beautiful painting, congratulations in order for a lovely poem

Deborah Burch February 1, 2017 at 12:35 PM Congratulations Andy!!! Well done girl!!! :) big Hugggs!! Love ya!! Deb

Sandra Haight January 29, 2017 at 7:14 PM Beautiful imagery in your poem, Andrea, and a perfect picture to enhance it! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Matthew Anish January 29, 2017 at 4:24 PM This is a nice poem! Why is called rhyme in 60? Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Daver Austin January 29, 2017 at 4:01 PM Laura Loo. What a lovely River and the Moon name. I like the poem also. Love, Old daver

Jennifer Walker January 29, 2017 at 12:00 PM Beautiful flow of rhyme.

Eve Roper January 29, 2017 at 11:38 AM This is so very beautiful, Andrea, good luck in the contest already a winner. Hugs

Joe Maverick January 29, 2017 at 10:45 AM A very discriptive and placid write Andrea, as always a well worded piece, for us to Enjoy.' I have replied to your earlier soup mail.'

Jan Allison January 29, 2017 at 4:21 AM Absolutely enchanting Andrea such a beautiful flow to your rhyme :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel January 29, 2017 at 4:11 AM Great write on the enchanting moon and the river ride, Andrea:)

Donna Roberts January 28, 2017 at 10:47 PM Oh how that pic fits the words so well

Arthur Vaso January 28, 2017 at 10:33 PM I really loved this one Andrea! :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy January 28, 2017 at 9:45 PM Smooth wonderful read!

Joseph May January 28, 2017 at 8:51 PM An enchanting write Andrea... love it...hugs