A Rhyme At Night

Night has cast her darkened net
 over the sphere of the bold,
 gently laying out the black
 starred with orbs foretold

Sheets of mist bedaub the earth
 glistening strands of green,
 second shades stain the trees
 daubed with a greying sheen

Golden flowers rise to greet the night
 opening their petals of soul,
 swaying slowly with no might
 within this a story unfolds

Cicadas croon to the southern Imps
 it echoes along a tight string,
 the grasshoppers not to be outdone
 begin to raucously sing 

Eventide sweeps across the skyline
 in moving shadows of light,
 in it dip the sleeves of my soul
 within is the body I write 

Across the cusp a half moon of life
 begins to spill into day,
 retreating from the growing bright
 down my being must lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ryerson Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 4:07 AM
I usually try to pick out a favorite line or verse when I comment but I can't do it here...Okay, okay! Next to last verse and the next to last line! Your mention of cicadas brings back sweet childhood memories...
Onclaud Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 9:55 AM
really good at your word choice, i see your creativity in each image that you write, jayne... huggs and see you again!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Hi Jayne love this and thanks to Tim for pointing the way xx
Goff Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Smooth and sweet, Jayne! Great work! Jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 7:18 PM
this is very nice, Jayne and I hope to see more of you at Soup.
Delaney Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Beautiful. I love the flow and the mood it evokes. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 6:38 AM
- A lovely writing poetry, Jayne - I like it - well done - Have a great Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Eggins Avatar
February 2, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise I am very happy you liked it :) love Jayne x
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