A Revelation

The
door
            was
            open
I
wandered
                    in
amazed
silence
             solitude
alone
with
               my
               thoughts
He
spoke
                then
                sat
listening
                we
                dined
He
became
               a
               friend
I
became
               as
                a
child


Rev 3.20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Henderson Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 1:44 PM
I really really liked the message.
Squyres Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 10:54 AM
This is excellent !! To become the child of the Master Teacher... love when HE visits me. Enjoyed !!
Merryman Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Fantastic write, Brian! I love this! This one's going in my favs. Love, Kim
Babcock Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Hi Brian long time since we connected. Always enjoy your poetry. Back in the city and hopefully back more at the soup. Kids moved down here so now I will not have to travel each week. love phyl
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