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A Revelation

A Revelation Adrift alone in silence amidst total darkness I sense the universe as a warm sparkling vessel Not fragments of insignificant frigid orbs A throbbing heart embedded with infinite dreams For weary eyes in search of meaning and possibilities 11/22/2021 8:04 p.m. Lake Worth Florida USA

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Date: 11/27/2021 8:08:00 PM
Oh, what a grand vision, Anselmo! And yes, there is so much unity in the universe, despite all the randomness that seems to overwhelm the eye at first. Superb poesy! Light and Life, Gershon
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Date: 12/7/2021 3:17:00 PM
I think our vision about existence align. There's so much unknown beyond our periphery that defies logic, worthy of introspection. Off to the stars Gershon!...ab
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 11/28/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Gershon! I sense that deep within overwhelming chaos, there is tranquility and order. I appreciate it when you express your insights...ab

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