A Revelation

A Revelation


                         Adrift alone in silence amidst total darkness

                      I sense the universe as a warm sparkling vessel

                            Not fragments of insignificant frigid orbs

                      A throbbing heart embedded with infinite dreams

                   For weary eyes in search of meaning and possibilities







11/22/2021
8:04 p.m.
Lake Worth
Florida
USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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November 27, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Oh, what a grand vision, Anselmo! And yes, there is so much unity in the universe, despite all the randomness that seems to overwhelm the eye at first. Superb poesy! Light and Life, Gershon
Boles Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 3:17 PM
I think our vision about existence align. There's so much unknown beyond our periphery that defies logic, worthy of introspection. Off to the stars Gershon!...ab
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November 28, 2021 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Gershon! I sense that deep within overwhelming chaos, there is tranquility and order. I appreciate it when you express your insights...ab
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