A Return Home, Only Time Will Tell

Oh blessed hope !

Both hardly a believable dream,
Sweltering heat with bloodshed in the street...
Send the troops home !
There is no clear reason for them to roam..,

These are desolate times !
For we have chosen ill faded rhymes..,
The casualties are enormous ?
For a stated cause that clearly atrocious..,

A mother's cry as the door chime rings,
A vanishing salute to freedom as the church choir sings !
Let us look above to all the heavenly love..,
Merciful one, take this chip off my shoulder..,

Stop the senseless fighting before our dear nation grows a bit colder,
Suddenly, seeds were dropped out of a farmers bag,
In time roots spring up fresh out of the fertile soil...
As the sun heats up,


Time will tell when this harvest will soon boil...
In the vast game of life,
One's time is so very brief !
The soul yearns for its' heavenly relief..,

Share with others who may want to turn over a brand new leaf..,

Time will tell of the true importance of helping one another,
To never give into the finish line..,
Nor harsh criticism that our society puts out !
Like a famous fighter in his final bout !

Time will tell of the return home,
To the open arms of a loved one !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/1/2010 9:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Mario, excellent message penned here. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2010 7:19:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Mario
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congrats, Mario. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations Mario on your poetry winning in Paula Swanson's contest "Poetry For Poetry's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 9:24:00 PM
good one , congrats on your win
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Mario on your big win in Paula's contest with this rare beauty.. enjoyed with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:16:00 PM
We have missed you, Mario, but I'm glad to see you returning with such an insightful poem about the chooices that lay before us. Indeed, one's time on earth is so very brief! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Mario
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