A Response To Your First Poem
The Love of Two People
The love of two people is the root of a family
To love is to believe
To love is to care
To love is to have faith
To love is to trust
To love is to understand
To love is to stand by each other in sickness and in death
8/28/2014
The Loss of Two People
It used to be the love of two people, but it didn't last
Times have change and commitments were broken
Was it a crush or was it lust
Was it love or was it the security the other provided
Was it helping each other or was it all one sided
Love should have been the best and the worst the Yin and Yang
9/27/2015
Contest Name: A response to your first poem
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