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A Response To Your First Poem

The Love of Two People

The love of two people is the root of a family
To love is to believe
To love is to care 
To love is to have faith
To love is to trust
To love is to understand
To love is to stand by each other in sickness and in death 

8/28/2014


The  Loss of Two People

It used to be the love of two people, but it didn't last
Times have change and commitments were broken
Was it a crush or was it lust
Was it love or was it the security the other provided
Was it helping each other or was it all one sided
Love should have been the best and the worst the Yin and Yang

9/27/2015

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Macfarlane Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:34 PM
So sad when love ends, but life goes on, and we love again. Big congrats on a touching write.
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Cecilia. What makes it hard is I liked her :( but I try never to interfere with my children's life.
Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sometimes relationships are just not meant to be..Sara
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:35 PM
Thank you, Sara, you are so so right. :(
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Eve, Congratulations on the response to your first poem ***
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:36 PM
Thank you, Skat, your support is always welcome. Hugs dear friend
Lamoureux Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 9:14 AM
A sad one Eve and unfortunately for many it is their reality. Congrats on your win. I told my wife she is beautiful again today.
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:37 PM
Yes, Richard, it was sad. Oh, thank you for telling your wife. Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 3:04 AM
Wonderful poem Eve n so is the win! Big congrats!
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, your support is always welcome. Hugs dear friend
Lindley Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:24 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN EVE..
Tor Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Eve Nice win!
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 5:08 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) Hugs Jan xx
Severo Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 10:05 PM
Very creative, I shall wish for the first! xoxo
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Aurore, thank you so very much for your compliment and you're very welcome support. Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 8:17 PM
well done, Eve. Guess what I get to write about? Seeing an elf at Xmas time!! Good grief!
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Haha.... well I'm just going to have to read it. Thank you so very much, Andrea. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 4:15 PM
A lovely response Eve - its so sad when a relationship breaks down but often it is for the best. I hope they have both moved on:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
September 27, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thank you for your response. Sent S.M.. They have both struggled , but they are trying.
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