A Response To-

A response to

“I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.” 
? Maya Angelou




Raspy words will silently wilt away with the seasons     
A brief touch of sorrow lingers after the winds change    
Undesirable actions get weeded out as pain subsides   
Like the soul dead fruit plucked out for healthier fruiting
But the humiliations live immortally in archives of the soul

Maya, the enchantress, takes us into her world of power
Eluding us from the higher truths of being born to love
A kind expression only can kindle a warmth in the heart
An endearing gesture of trust keeps the embers burning
Much after the calendars snooze away into silence


October 25, 2016
For Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:04 AM
This is a beautiful response to the quote, Balveen:) congratulations on your top spot:)
Kimathi Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Maya Angelou is one of my favorite poets!! Congrats Balveen, for your well, deserved first placement with this wonderful dedication!! ;-)
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:49 AM
Teddy, it's so kind of you! Thanks! Balveen
Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:46 PM
congrats Balveen to win the top place. Hugs
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Thanks Anisha! Balveen
Tagore Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Wonderful revelation ... so skillfully penned. Best regards, Bobby
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Thanks Anindya! You're work is great, too! Balveen
Krampe Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 7:19 PM
Congrats on your win, Balveen. I love the phrase "archives of the soul". Agnes
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thanks for the visit & appreciation, Agnes!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 6:13 PM
ooo.... nice Balveen, congratulations on your win!!!!!! ... Hugs Eve
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:45 AM
Thanks Eve! Your ooo did it all-made my heart soar!
Gupta Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Touchingly lovely ...
Cheema Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 4:39 AM
Glad you liked it, Probir!
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