A Respite In Time

Your heart whispers secrets to your soul at night, divulging secrets made in the light of day. In your dreams, fledgling feelings prepare for flight, fleeing reality as it drifts away. Anxiety fights sleep, keeping you awake, micromanaging each minuscule mistake. And yet, the secret whisperings of your heart anchor your thoughts, encouraging dreams to start. Dreams are an abandonment of decisions, your mind subconsciously scripts the role you'll play. And your role's subject to many revisions, from fighting wars to starring in a ballet. Tethered to whatever your mind's perceiving, fantasy dreams lull you into believing. Although they're not real, they often feel so, a respite in time, where only sleep can go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiri Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Emile congratulations on your HM!;)
Pinet Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 11:22 AM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Marine Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:14 AM
We need our dreamscapes - I think even nightmares help our subconscious selves to deal with what we might not be able to when in a conscious state. I love the painting- bubbles of images that float in our dreamlike state. Dreams never seem like fantasy, yet " sleep is an abandonment of decisions..." Well said, and well crafted poem, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Aqua, I appreciate your support and wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 9:18 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 8:36 AM
Thank you so much Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
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December 10, 2018 at 7:40 PM
A favorite, as you know I exist much of the time in a dream state where only I can go. Wow! love it Emile. I really do.
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much Caren, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
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December 10, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Love where you go to, in this wonderful poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Harry, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Yes, truth is sometimes revealed in our dreams even if those dreams are fearful and/or beautiful. Lovely poem (as usual), Emile.
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Carole, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
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