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Rispetto

The rispetto lyric is generally composed of eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. In its earliest form, the rhyme scheme was usually abababcc; however, ababccdd is now more prominent.            

My heart whispers secrets to my soul at night, lost truths overshadowed by the light of day. Through dreams, fledgling feelings experience flight, fleeing reality as it drifts away. Anxiety fights sleep to keep me awake, micromanaging each minuscule mistake. And yet, the secret whisperings of my heart anchor my thoughts, encouraging dreams to start. Sleep is an abandonment of decisions where you subconsciously script the part you play. Your role is subject to many revisions, from fighting wars to starring in a ballet. Tethered to the emotions you're perceiving, fantasy dreams trick you into believing. And though they're not real; they tend to feel so, a respite in time where only sleep can go.

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Date: 1/6/2020 8:32:00 AM
Emile congratulations on your HM!;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2018 1:14:00 AM
We need our dreamscapes - I think even nightmares help our subconscious selves to deal with what we might not be able to when in a conscious state. I love the painting- bubbles of images that float in our dreamlike state. Dreams never seem like fantasy, yet " sleep is an abandonment of decisions..." Well said, and well crafted poem, Emile!
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Date: 1/5/2020 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Aqua, I appreciate your support and wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/16/2018 9:18:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/30/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 7:40:00 PM
A favorite, as you know I exist much of the time in a dream state where only I can go. Wow! love it Emile. I really do.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 5:43:00 PM
Love where you go to, in this wonderful poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Harry, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 2:53:00 PM
Yes, truth is sometimes revealed in our dreams even if those dreams are fearful and/or beautiful. Lovely poem (as usual), Emile.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Carole, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.

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