A Respite In Time

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My heart whispers secrets to my soul at night, revealing truths shadowed by the light of day. Within dreams, fledgling feelings flex wings for flight; fleeing reality as it drifts away. Anxiety fights sleep to keep me awake; micromanaging each minuscule mistake. And yet, the secret whisperings of my heart anchor my thoughts, encouraging dreams to start. Dreams are an abandonment of decisions; your mind subconsciously scripts the part you'll play. Your role is subject to many revisions, from fighting wars to starring in a ballet. Tethered to the emotions you're perceiving, fantasy dreams trick you into believing. Although they're not real, they tend to feel so, a respite in time where only sleep can go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/6/2020 8:32:00 AM
Emile congratulations on your HM!;)
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Date: 1/6/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/30/2018 1:14:00 AM
We need our dreamscapes - I think even nightmares help our subconscious selves to deal with what we might not be able to when in a conscious state. I love the painting- bubbles of images that float in our dreamlike state. Dreams never seem like fantasy, yet " sleep is an abandonment of decisions..." Well said, and well crafted poem, Emile!
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Date: 1/5/2020 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Aqua, I appreciate your support and wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/16/2018 9:18:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/30/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 7:40:00 PM
A favorite, as you know I exist much of the time in a dream state where only I can go. Wow! love it Emile. I really do.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 5:43:00 PM
Love where you go to, in this wonderful poem, Emile.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Harry, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/10/2018 2:53:00 PM
Yes, truth is sometimes revealed in our dreams even if those dreams are fearful and/or beautiful. Lovely poem (as usual), Emile.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you Carole, your support is truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
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