A Reservoir of Burps

   Carbonation's bubbles
     create inside of me
   A reservoir of burps
     waiting to be freed

   When they're released
     at the 'perfect time'
    Incredibly effective
     as lol lines
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Elliott Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Hi Gershon, my family here and I can relate. The five of us belch around each other and laugh about it. But my daughter's aunt doesn't think gas is funny at all, from either end, so when she was here we had to be "prim and proper" around her. Lol about your witty poem. All the best and Shalom. ~
Wolf Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:29 PM
Learned about burps as a sheriff. ~ Wyatt Burp
M  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Haha love it BB!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Hey, I can even turn a bupe.
M  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 1:21 PM
I bet you can burp a tune!! Haha
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 1:05 PM
It's all in the timing of the burp. ~ Why At Burp
Lawless Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 4:39 AM
but does it affect the atmosphere...look out the window....are they carrying signs ...
Cunningham Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 12:17 AM
You didnt say which end lol. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 9:16 PM
LOL…hiccup
Kingston Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 8:30 PM
Time for tums ! I am married to a tall italian who needs one now and then. "No more soda for you dear hubby!"
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