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A Repeated Past

Seeing yesterday's mistakes repeat themselves Looking for hope like looking for elves Lessons learned reversing like a mirror Judging without considering the interior Basic teachings lost like a dream that was nothing but a blur Greed and false promises continuing to lure Almost like the world has dyslexia Arguing over who is right from the left Looking at our faults like a thousand pound heft People addicted to love and attention But when abandoned go looking for redemption. Forgetting origins like they had amnesia, Using money as a light anesthesia. Generations repeating like reruns of episodes, Old mistakes reworded and put into different codes. People denying what they can’t understand, Taking chances like stepping onto new land. Swarming the same delusional dream like a fly, Pulling the trigger over a senseless lie. For every different person, a different personality to wear, Leaning on friends that will never care, Then run crying when our hands are bare Begging for forgiveness like begging for air, Because this world will never go anywhere Chasing after the same dollar that wasn’t there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 2:34:00 AM
CARRIGAN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 12:11:00 PM
Carrigan Collins, awesome to see this one again. linda
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Date: 3/17/2015 10:06:00 PM
Carrigan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:34:00 PM
Carrigan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/11/2015 1:33:00 AM
Great write, Carrigan, sharp and perceptive. You capture our shallow world well. Greetings, and welcome to Poetry Soup, where nice people hang out with lots of encouragement, inspiration and hugs. Look forward to reading more from you. Great start. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/10/2015 7:18:00 PM
This write has so many truths and so many good lines, "using money as light anesthesia" "begging for forgiveness like begging for air" I enjoyed this and the last line brought it all home nicely.
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Carrigan Collins
Date: 3/10/2015 9:10:00 PM
Thank you

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