A Recollection

P icture O f O ur H appiness S omewhere T ime I s C oloured K inda S epia

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2021 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your win and day..............

Brian Strand
Date: 1/11/2021 2:32:00 PM

Such sweet memories,they persuaded me to enter.Cheers Paula

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/10/2021 10:03:00 AM

Brian, the depth of your "happiness" is truly encompassed in the simplicity of your words like a snapshot of a moment in time. Congratulations on your win. So wonderful to be able to congratulate YOU!

Brian Strand
Date: 1/10/2021 12:35:00 PM

This pastime has a reality for me( with two particular gran daughters,now lovely loving adults),hence my response ( I could not resist) in a form I am not too enamoured with.I too was an avid contestant way back in what I consider now as my apprentice years at PS.Cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 10:33:00 AM

OH wow, I liked how you used KINDA in there. It's an American thing, but maybe you guys do it a lot too! yeah, Brian, I will never figure you out. I thought I gave you an awesome haiku last time but I did not win. No matter, I always keep trying and enjoy the times I am able to place!

Brian Strand
Date: 12/30/2020 11:34:00 AM

Yes Andrea,Hollywood /Tv shows ,the big influence here since 40s ..if you let me know title I'll critique it and compare to the one I gave you a first.You are indeed a faithful contestant,you deserve your top place in the listings,because you also are a real poet imho based upon a decade of reading your output.